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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. -Comics -Books -Radio -Television -Film -Theatre v.10

Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. -Comics -Books -Radio -Television -Film -Theatre v. 10
Nowadays, we live in a communicated world where there are several mass media for broadcasting information. Actually, it is impossible to imagine the life without interacting with them. Nevertheless, there are some more important than another, but in my opinion, the most effective are film, radio and television, for the reason that these are the most popular for the audience. However, those three have negative and positive things, which have an influence on people’s behaviour. The advantage of these media is that they are most effective, because they have a great scope in the public. While the wireless can give a message more immediately, the television can reach more people, due to many individuals consume it. Likewise, the film also has those features, because with Netflix and TV Cable is easier watch any movie, therefore, for having this entertainment you only need internet. Otherwise, those media have disadvantages as well, for the cause that the three are used for washing brains. In the world there are not a strong regulation for seeing if the message that the media says is a good or bad thing. For instance, in dictatorial countries, especially TV and radio, are used for faking the reality. Also, in the cinema, many films have a bad influenced in people’s lives, as in the USA where a lot of murders are inspired in violent movies. In conclusion, it is important can understand that there are several ways to say a message through the mass media. However, in my opinion the most effective are radio, tv and film because they can reach a big group of society. Conversely, we have to be aware that those information technologies can be used for the benefit of the powerful people.
Nowadays, we
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in a communicated world where there are several mass
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media
for broadcasting information. Actually, it is impossible to imagine the life without interacting with them.
Nevertheless
, there are
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some
more
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important
than another,
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in my opinion, the most effective are film, radio and television, for the reason that these are the most popular for the audience.
However
, those three have
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negative
and
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positive
things, which have an influence on
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people’s
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behaviour
.

The advantage of these
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media
is that they are most effective,
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because
they have a great scope in the public. While the wireless can give a message more immediately, the television can reach more
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people
, due to
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many
individuals consume it.
Likewise
, the film
also
has those features,
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because
with Netflix and TV Cable is easier
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watch
any movie,
therefore
, for having this entertainment you
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only
need internet.

Otherwise
, those
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media
have disadvantages
as well
, for the cause that the three are
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used
for washing brains. In the world there are not a strong regulation for seeing if the message that the
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media
says is a
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good
or
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bad
thing.
For instance
, in dictatorial countries,
especially
TV and radio, are
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used
for faking the reality.
Also
, in the cinema,
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many
films have a
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bad
influenced in
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people’s
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lives
, as in the USA where
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a lot of
murders
are inspired
in violent movies.

In conclusion
, it is
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important
can understand that there are several ways to say a message through the mass
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media
.
However
, in my opinion the most effective are radio,
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tv
and film
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because
they can reach a
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big
group of society.
Conversely
, we
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have to
be aware that those information technologies can be
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used
for the benefit of the powerful
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people
.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. -Comics -Books -Radio -Television -Film -Theatre v. 10

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
288 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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