All the governments should consider a special budget on both railways and roads. Most of the people believe that this money must be more for railways rather than roads.
Firstly, the railway transportation organization is so important for the reason of its user-friendly and also it's a green technology. The main part of Railway structure is metro and underground, which are used by a large majority of people in their daily works and urban transit. It's also much cheaper than taxis and buses because of its energy resource type. However, in the rush hours, they are almost crowded, which may bother the passengers when they are exhausted and tired of work.
On the other hand, the roads and the road based transportation organization are important too. Despite the fact that this kind of transport system is so comfortable and easier to use, it has more risks, for instance, crashes. Automobiles make more pollution and also so much hazardous gas, which are dangerous for everybody's health: In large cities, on of the most critical problem is the traffic that can effect on the mental health of the people and cause a overusing of fuels such as gasoline. The traffic is a disadvantage on the road based transportation, which is similar to the railway's rush hours when the people are tired and need to rest as soon as possible.
At the end, I suppose that railways should get more financial supports than roads because of their benefits, if governments want to let their populations live better and healthier.
All the
governments
should consider a special budget on both
railways
and
roads
. Most of the
people
believe that this money
must
be more for
railways
rather
than roads.
Firstly
, the
railway
transportation organization is
so
important
for the reason of its user-friendly and
also
it's a green technology. The main part of
Railway
structure is metro and underground, which are
used
by a large majority of
people
in their daily works and urban transit. It's
also
much cheaper than taxis and buses
because
of its energy resource type.
However
, in the rush hours, they are almost crowded, which may bother the passengers when they
are exhausted
and tired of work.
On the other hand
, the
roads
and the
road based
transportation organization are
important
too. Despite the fact that this kind of transport system is
so
comfortable and easier to
use
, it has more
risks
,
for instance
, crashes. Automobiles
make
more pollution and
also
so
much hazardous gas, which are
dangerous
for everybody's health: In large cities,
on
of the most critical problem is the traffic that can effect on the mental health of the
people
and cause
a
overusing of fuels such as gasoline. The traffic is a disadvantage on the
road based
transportation, which is similar to the railway's rush hours when the
people
are tired
and need to rest as
soon
as possible.
At the
end
, I suppose that
railways
should
get
more financial supports than
roads
because
of their benefits, if
governments
want to
let
their populations
live
better and healthier.
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