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In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. It is more preferable in today's job market as without theoretical knowledge tasks cannot be performed in a job. v.4

In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. It is more preferable in today's job market as without theoretical knowledge tasks cannot be performed in a job. v. 4
In today's employment scenario, practical knowledge is more necessary to get a job than the academic qualification. It is often argued that the employees may not require any academic degrees to get a job in the future. Here, I partially agree with this opinion. This essay is about the reasons for such opinion. First of all, I believe that employers nowadays are looking for employees with tons of experiences rather than formal education. Experience or practical skills aid a person to work collectively and to deal with common problems, but a worker having only theoretical knowledge cannot perform like the one with experiences. For instance, In Nepal, we can see many prestigious companies are hiring employees having numerous practical skills even if he/she lack theoretical knowledge. On the other hand, I somehow disagree with the statement as practical knowledge is the only thing that is required for a person to get job. I think that to deal with the new challenges which has never come before, a highly educated individual can handle it quite easily than the one having experience only. Moreover, experienced person may be good at what he is doing regularly, but theoretical insight is essential to deal with dynamic working environment. A recent report on the job market by Oxford university claims that, an educated individual is more likely to deal with uncertainties or risk associated with organization rater than others. In conclusion, I think that both theoretical insight and practical skills are equally important to a job. Experience in related realm will assist an employee to do his/her work effectively, while education needed to tackle the obstacles associated with the job. Therefore, I partially agree with the given statement.
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than the academic qualification. It is
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argued that the
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employees
may not require any academic degrees to
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get
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job
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agree
with this opinion. This essay is about the reasons for such opinion.

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, I believe that employers nowadays are looking for
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employees
with tons of
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experiences
rather
than formal education.
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Experience
or
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practical
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skills
aid a person to work
collectively
and to
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deal
with common problems,
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but
a worker having
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only
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theoretical
knowledge cannot perform like the one with
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experiences
.
For instance
, In Nepal, we can
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many
prestigious
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companies
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employees
having numerous
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practical
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skills
even if he/she lack
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theoretical
knowledge.

On the other hand
, I somehow disagree with the statement as
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practical
knowledge is the
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only
thing that
is required
for a person to
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job
. I
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that to
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with the new challenges which has never
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come
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before
, a
highly
educated individual can handle it quite
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easily
than the one having
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experience
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only
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, experienced person may be
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good
at what he is doing
regularly
,
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but
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theoretical
insight is essential to
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deal
with dynamic working environment. A recent report on the
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job
market by Oxford university claims that, an educated individual is more likely to
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deal
with uncertainties or
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risk
associated with organization rater than others.

In conclusion
, I
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think
that both
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theoretical
insight and
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practical
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skills
are
equally
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important
to a
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job
.
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Experience
in related realm will assist an
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employee
to do his/her work
effectively
, while education needed to tackle the obstacles associated with the
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job
.
Therefore
, I
partially
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agree
with the
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statement.
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IELTS essay In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. It is more preferable in today's job market as without theoretical knowledge tasks cannot be performed in a job. v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
283 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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