It is argued by some people that both the wealthy and those with little means find it challenging to gain admission into university. I agree with this notion because accessibility to university is often based on academic merits and there is a limit to the number of students each higher institution can admit.
First of all, a major reason for the difficult accessibility to higher institutions by the wealthy and the poor is because university's admissions are often base on academic performance. Therefore, students who meet the requirements for admission into colleges are offered admission first, even if the ability to pay tuition would be considered later. For instance, in Nigeria, credit pass in Mathematics and English is a prerequisite for undergraduate studies in federal universities. As a result, both the rich and the poor who fall short of these requirements would not be admitted in the university.
Furthermore, there is a limit to the number of students who can be offered admission in various universities. In other words, universities will not admit more than the the number of students the resources of the university would cater for and all students are subjected to this system. For instance most higher institutions in Nigeria admit between 4000 and 10000 undergraduates annually. Thus, since both the rich and the poor are subjected to this quota system, no one is favoured.
In conclusion, I agree with the view that both the affluent and the poor face the same difficulty in accessibility to university education due to the fact that both must meet academic requirements for admission and many universities have a limit on the number of yearly intakes, which equally affects everyone.
It
is argued
by
some
people
that both the wealthy and those with
little
means find it challenging
to gain
admission
into
university
. I
agree
with this notion
because
accessibility to
university
is
often
based on academic merits and there is a limit to the
number
of
students
each higher institution can admit.
First of all
, a major reason for the difficult accessibility to higher institutions by the wealthy and the
poor
is
because
university's
admissions
are
often
base on academic performance.
Therefore
,
students
who
meet
the requirements for
admission
into colleges
are offered
admission
first
, even if the ability to pay tuition would
be considered
later.
For instance
, in Nigeria, credit pass in Mathematics and English is a prerequisite for undergraduate studies in federal
universities
.
As a result
, both the rich and the
poor
who fall short of these requirements would not
be admitted
in the university.
Furthermore
, there is a limit to the
number
of
students
who can
be offered
admission
in various
universities
.
In other words
,
universities
will not admit more than
the the
number
of
students
the resources of the
university
would cater for and all
students
are subjected
to this system.
For instance
most higher
institutions in Nigeria admit between 4000 and 10000 undergraduates
annually
.
Thus
, since both the rich and the
poor
are subjected
to this quota system, no one is
favoured
.
In conclusion
, I
agree
with the view that both the affluent and the
poor
face the same difficulty in accessibility to
university
education due to the fact that both
must
meet
academic requirements for
admission
and
many
universities
have a limit on the
number
of yearly intakes, which
equally
affects everyone.
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