Billions of dollars are spent on space research This is a waste of money More money must be spent on improving the problems of people on Earth To what extent do you agree or disagree v.1
Billions of dollars are spent on space research This is a waste of money More money must be spent on improving the problems of people on Earth v. 1
In the modern era, where the majority of folks across the globe are suffering from various health issues because of unhealthy eating habits and therefore, it is crucial for the authorities to increase the tax on such unhealthy foods. I, partially, agree with this statement.
Nowadays, it has become increasingly common that a host of people adopted junk meal in their daily eating habits because of which they are suffering from various health ailments such as obesity and other medical complications in a very early age. Furthermore, the unhealthy meal is very expensive as a result of which, people have to spend extra bucks every month which in turn, can be saved and utilized for other things. To illustrate, In a recent survey in India, it has been observed that the children who eats junk food are more obese as compared to the ones who eat homemade cooked food.
On the other hand, fast food chains create a plethora of job opportunities for the locals and hence, rise in tax rates would drastically reduce the number of jobs and therefore increase the unemployment rate. Then, the junk meal chains already paying the taxes to the government and any rise in tax rates meant, less profit for them, as a result of which many of them will close their operations. For example, in a current survey by Delhi Government in India, it has been found that eating joints like Pizza Hut and Mc Donalds have recruited 6000 people in 2019.
To conclude, undoubtedly, fast foodstuff chains are playing an imperative role in creating the employment opportunities and increasing the revenue, but it is equally important that the teenagers should be aware about the health issues caused due to continuous exposure to fast foods.
In the modern era, where the majority of folks across the globe are suffering from various health issues
because
of unhealthy eating habits and
therefore
, it is crucial for the authorities to increase the
tax
on such unhealthy
foods
. I,
partially
,
agree
with this statement.
Nowadays, it has become
increasingly
common that a host of
people
adopted junk meal in their daily eating habits
because
of which they are suffering from various health ailments such as obesity and other medical complications in a
very
early age.
Furthermore
, the unhealthy meal is
very
expensive
as a result
of which,
people
have to
spend extra bucks every month which in turn, can
be saved
and utilized for other things. To illustrate, In a recent survey in India, it has
been observed
that the children who
eats
junk
food
are more obese as compared to the ones who eat homemade cooked food.
On the other hand
,
fast
food
chains create a plethora of job opportunities for the locals and
hence
, rise in
tax
rates would
drastically
reduce
the number of jobs and
therefore
increase the unemployment rate. Then, the junk meal chains already paying the
taxes
to the
government
and any rise in
tax
rates meant, less profit for them,
as a result
of which
many
of them will close their operations.
For example
, in a
current
survey by Delhi
Government
in India, it has
been found
that eating joints like Pizza Hut and
Mc
Donalds have
recruited 6000
people
in 2019.
To conclude
,
undoubtedly
,
fast
foodstuff chains are playing an imperative role in creating the employment opportunities and increasing the revenue,
but
it is
equally
important
that the
teenagers
should be aware about the health issues caused due to continuous exposure to
fast
foods
.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes