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Besides a lot of advantages, some people believe that the internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.3

The Internet is becoming one of the most controversial topics among the people of the twenty first century. I strongly believe that the net is extremely beneficial if however, used with caution. Some may think that the web is a dangerous place and it is out of control. Parents may view it as a terrifying place for their kids, due to the fact it expose them to obscene scenes or vulgar language. It is also the source of harmful viruses, malware and scams which can often lead to crimes moreover, might lead to corruption. The internet has always been accused of piracy, since most of the statistics illustrated that a lot of music, movies, and games are being downloaded illegally from the web. It is highly offensive to the artist to find his work leaked worldwide without his permission furthermore, it is being downloaded with any cost whatsoever. Despite the harsh comments and accusation the internet has been receiving, its advantages will always overcome its disadvantages. The enormous information on the web makes it more than suitable for projects, researches as well as scientific studies. Socially, the net has covered all types of achievements. You can easily send messages within a fraction of second all across the globe. A person can easily interact with other people across the world by using social networks, such as Facebook and Twitter. To conclude what I started with, the internet will forever be an arguable topic even if people tend to use it or ignore it.
The Internet is becoming one of the most controversial topics among the
people
of the twenty
first
century. I
strongly
believe that the net is
extremely
beneficial if
however
,
used
with caution.
Some
may
think
that the web is a
dangerous
place and it is out of control.

Parents may view it as a terrifying place for their kids, due to the fact it
expose
them to obscene scenes or vulgar language. It is
also
the source of harmful viruses, malware and scams which can
often
lead to crimes
moreover
, might lead to corruption.

The internet has always
been accused
of piracy, since most of the statistics illustrated that
a lot of
music, movies, and games are
being downloaded
illegally
from the web. It is
highly
offensive to the artist to find his work leaked worldwide without his permission
furthermore
, it is
being downloaded
with any cost whatsoever.

Despite the harsh comments and accusation the internet has been receiving, its advantages will always overcome its disadvantages. The enormous information on the web
makes
it more than suitable for projects, researches
as well
as scientific studies.

Socially
, the net has covered all types of achievements. You can
easily
send
messages within a fraction of second all across the globe. A person can
easily
interact with other
people
across the world by using social networks, such as Facebook and Twitter.

To conclude
what I
started
with, the internet will forever be an arguable topic even if
people
tend to
use
it or
ignore
it.
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IELTS essay Beside a lot of advantages, some people believe that the Internet creates many problems. with this statement?

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