Besides a lot of advantages, some people believe that the development. v.1
Besides a lot of advantages, some people believe that the development. v. 1
It is an undeniable fact that technology plays an indispensable role in today’s world. Some people believe that the development of technology creates many problems for us. Personally, I absolutely agree with this idea, besides some advantages that technology contributed it still has negative impacts on people and there are two reasons why I hold this view.
One reason is that some people become addicted to technological equipment and spend most of their time surfing the Internet, watching TV series or playing video games. Therefore, they will work stagnating, behind schedule and their work will be going down. When someone addicted to technology, they can become a taciturn person and making them less interactive with others. In my opinion, this is not good for their social life as they become less close relationship with members of their family or with their friends. For example, if you always use technology equipment like a smartphone, you will lose a lot of relationships, from there they will lose a lot of chances to develop and support from everyone.
Another reason is that the development of technology will lead to some diseases for people to use it. First of all, if you spend a lot of time to use technological equipment, your eyes inevitably suffer from the negative impacts like eye pain, eye strain, even impaired vision. Besides, it is the cause of cancer, there is has research claims that technological equipment emit high-frequency waves and it can easily cause brain tumours. This is really a serious problem and we should use technological equipment, to some extent.
In conclusion, in my view, technology is a tool really wonderful and helpful for us. However, it still has many problems so we should thoroughly consider this development of technology. Personally, I think if you use technological equipment suitable, these problems completely can avoid.
It is an undeniable fact that
technology
plays an indispensable role in
today
’s world.
Some
people
believe that the development of
technology
creates
many
problems
for us.
Personally
, I
absolutely
agree
with this
idea
,
besides
some
advantages that
technology
contributed it
still
has
negative
impacts on
people
and there are two reasons why I hold this view.
One reason is that
some
people
become addicted to
technological
equipment
and spend most of their time surfing the Internet, watching TV series or playing video games.
Therefore
, they will work stagnating, behind schedule and their work will be going down. When someone addicted to
technology
, they can become a taciturn person and making them less interactive with others. In my opinion, this is not
good
for their social life as they become less close relationship with members of their family or with their friends.
For example
, if you always
use
technology
equipment
like a smartphone, you will lose
a lot of
relationships, from there they will lose
a lot of
chances to develop and support from everyone.
Another reason is that the development of
technology
will lead to
some
diseases for
people
to
use
it.
First of all
, if you spend
a lot of
time to
use
technological
equipment
, your eyes
inevitably
suffer from the
negative
impacts like eye pain, eye strain, even impaired vision.
Besides
, it is the cause of cancer, there is has research claims that
technological
equipment
emit high-frequency waves and it can
easily
cause brain
tumours
. This is
really
a serious
problem and
we should
use
technological
equipment
, to
some
extent.
In conclusion
, in my view,
technology
is a tool
really
wonderful and helpful for us.
However
, it
still
has
many
problems
so
we should
thoroughly
consider this development of
technology
.
Personally
, I
think
if you
use
technological
equipment
suitable, these
problems
completely can avoid.
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