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Banks should receive billions of dollars in assistance from their governments during a financial crisis that was in large part their fault. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.2

Banks should receive billions of dollars in assistance from their governments during a financial crisis that was in large part their fault. with this statement? v. 2
As we are living in the twenty-first century, the role of the bank plays a very crucial and vital role in shaping up the economy as it acts as a backbone. The financial institution should receive ministration from the ruling regime at the time of their triggering economy meltdown. In my view, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious consideration. Authority theory and fragile rules are the key factors, and I will analyse the area in my essay. There is a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is the Government policy due to which unwitting victims of the unforeseen financial collapse and it has threatened their establishment. As an illustration, Demonetization in India affected the lending process of the most prolific subprime lenders as well and put them in the back foot. Further, many international organizations keep an eye on the suddenness of the situation, but regime policy cannot be unseen. This is, therefore, one of the reasons that the ministry is directly or indirectly responsible. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that fragile law rule which adversely affects the Banks. For instance, the power of the USA in 2002 created many provisions to promote individual personnel for house ownership by buying mortgages from lenders and selling them to investors who make the economy as a whole into a deep crisis and therefore put the economy into recession. Given the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that state rules and guideline, play a vital in shaping the bank policy making process. Thus, Banks should receive support and assistance in monetary terms from the authority.
As we are living in the twenty-
first
century, the role of the
bank
plays a
very
crucial and vital role in shaping up the
economy
as it acts as a backbone. The financial institution should receive ministration from the ruling regime at the time of their triggering
economy
meltdown. In my view, this apprehension
is warranted
and merits serious consideration. Authority theory and fragile
rules
are the key factors, and I will
analyse
the area in my essay.

There is a myriad of arguments in
favour
of my stance. The most preponderant one is the
Government
policy due to which unwitting victims of the unforeseen financial collapse and it has threatened their establishment. As an illustration, Demonetization in India
affected
the lending process of the most prolific subprime lenders
as well
and put them in the back foot.
Further
,
many
international organizations
keep
an eye on the suddenness of the situation,
but
regime policy cannot be unseen. This is,
therefore
, one of the reasons that the ministry is
directly
or
indirectly
responsible.

Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that fragile law
rule
which
adversely
affects the
Banks
.
For instance
, the power of the USA in 2002 created
many
provisions to promote individual personnel for
house
ownership by buying mortgages from lenders and selling them to investors who
make
the
economy
as a whole into a deep crisis and
therefore
put the
economy
into recession.

Given
the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that state
rules
and guideline, play a vital in shaping the
bank
policy making process.
Thus
,
Banks
should receive support and assistance in monetary terms from the authority.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Banks should receive billions of dollars in assistance from their governments during a financial crisis that was in large part their fault. with this statement? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
271 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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