Indonesia intends to execute some drug smugglers on capital punishment but Australia wants it to be cancelled. In my opinion, since Indonesia is an independent country and the capital punishment is supported by Indonesian law, it should be done without any hesitations despite the objection of another country.
My primary consideration for Indonesia to reject Australia’s demand is that Indonesia is a well independent country that should not base its actions on any other country’s opinion whether they are friendly countries or not. All the activities of Indonesian Government must be done in the name of freedom and goodness of its citizens, for example, if execute the drug smuggler on the death sentence is considered beneficial for the Indonesian people, then it should be performed without any reluctances.
The second reason I want to state is that the capital punishment is supported by Indonesian law. So the execution of narcotic carriers in Indonesia is a legal action, and the cancellation of it can be perceived as broken the law. As an old wisdom says; “everything has its price”, the smugglers already knew that taking narcotics into Indonesia is illegal and they can be sentenced to death because of it, but they still did it which means that they are ready to pay it with their lives.
In conclusion, I would like to emphasise that execute narcotic smugglers on death row is really Indonesia’s right and supported by Indonesian law, so Australia or any other country of the world has nothing to with it.
Indonesia intends to execute
some
drug
smugglers
on capital punishment
but
Australia wants it to
be cancelled
. In my opinion, since Indonesia is an independent
country
and the capital punishment
is supported
by Indonesian
law
, it should
be done
without any hesitations despite the objection of another country.
My primary consideration for Indonesia to reject Australia’s demand is that Indonesia is a well independent
country
that should not base its actions on any other
country’s
opinion whether they are friendly
countries
or not. All the activities of Indonesian
Government
must
be done
in the name of freedom and goodness of its citizens,
for example
, if execute the drug
smuggler
on the death sentence
is considered
beneficial for the Indonesian
people
, then it should
be performed
without any
reluctances
.
The second reason I want to state is that the capital punishment
is supported
by Indonesian
law
.
So
the execution of narcotic carriers in Indonesia is a legal action, and the cancellation of it can
be perceived
as broken the
law
. As an
old
wisdom says; “everything has its price”, the
smugglers
already knew that taking narcotics into Indonesia is
illegal and
they can
be sentenced
to death
because
of it,
but
they
still
did it which means that they are ready to pay it with their
lives
.
In conclusion
, I would like to
emphasise
that execute narcotic
smugglers
on death row is
really
Indonesia’s right and supported by Indonesian
law
,
so
Australia or any other
country
of the world has nothing to with it.
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