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At present we rely on oil for most of our energy needs. However oil is a fossil fuel and causes air pollution and it will eventually run out. Nuclear energy is only practical and clean source of energy how far do u agree? v.1

At present we rely on oil for most of our energy needs. However oil is a fossil fuel and causes air pollution and it will eventually run out. Nuclear energy is only practical and clean source of energy how far do u agree? v. 1
At the present time, getting information has become easier than ever before because of technology especially the internet. As people can readily avail the news they want over the internet, some people are saying that the age of printed newspapers is over now. Personally, I completely agree with the point and this essay will discuss the point in detail. Modern age is the age of technology and the internet is one of the greatest inventions of modern science. Because of this invention, the whole world has become like a global village where we can communicate with anyone within moments. As a result, we receive the latest news of what is happening around the world with just a click of a mouse. Every news company has their digital websites where they publish online news for the reader. In addition, people are using other forms of social media for example, Facebook, Instagram, Twitter and Linkedin for sharing their latest events. A recent survey has shown that nowadays people prefer to read news online rather than reading them in printed media like newspapers or magazines. Although there are some people who enjoy reading printed newspapers, they are very few in numbers. Especially the older generations of people, who are not accustomed to the latest technology, still prefer to read printed magazines. But, this does not stop the big companies to move forward with the technology and many news companies have already stopped their printed version. Another recent study has predicted that within the next five years, about ninety percent of news media will be shutting down their production of printed newspapers. To summarize, it is futile to fight with the technology rather we should embrace it with open arms. We have to accept the fact that printed media has served its time, and now it is the time of digital media.
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because
of
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technology
especially
the internet. As
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people
can
readily
avail the
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news
they want over the internet,
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some
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people
are saying that the age of
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printed
newspapers is over
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now
.
Personally
, I completely
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agree
with the point and this essay will discuss the point in detail.

Modern age is the age of
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technology
and the internet is one of the greatest inventions of modern science.
Because of this
invention, the whole world has become like a global village where we can communicate with anyone within moments.
As a result
, we receive the latest
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news
of what is happening around the world with
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just
a click of a mouse. Every
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news
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company
has their digital websites where they publish online
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news
for the reader.
In addition
,
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people
are using other forms of social
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media
for example
, Facebook, Instagram, Twitter and
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Linkedin
for sharing their latest
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events
. A recent survey has shown that nowadays
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people
prefer to read
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news
online
rather
than reading them in
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printed
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media
like newspapers or magazines.

Although there are
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some
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people
who enjoy reading
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printed
newspapers, they are
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very
few in numbers.
Especially
the older generations of
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people
, who are not accustomed to the latest
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technology
,
still
prefer to read
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printed
magazines.
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But
, this does not
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stop
the
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big
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companies
to
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move
forward with the
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technology
and
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many
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news
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companies
have already
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stopped
their
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printed
version. Another recent study has predicted that within the
next
five years, about ninety percent of
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news
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media
will be shutting down their production of
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printed
newspapers.

To summarize
, it is futile to fight with the
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technology
rather
we should embrace it with open arms. We
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have to
accept the fact that
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printed
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media
has served its time, and
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now
it is the time of digital
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media
.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay At present we rely on oil for most of our energy needs. However oil is a fossil fuel and causes air pollution and it will eventually run out. Nuclear energy is only practical and clean source of energy how far do u agree? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
308 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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