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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It is better to marry someone who is similar to you, rather than someone who is different from you. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.1

: It is better to marry someone who is similar to you, rather than someone who is different from you. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 1
Many people are inclined in buying towards ready-made foods than fresh cooked foods. In my own point of view, this development has more advantages than its disadvantages. This essay will explain further details. Convenience foods become widely popular among teenagers, bachelors, working people and people living in apartments as it saves time of meal preparation at home. Buying ingredients have been already time consuming in itself, as is the preparation and cooking process. Most of these foods take less than five to ten minutes only to cook. Additionally, purchasing ready-made foods offer convenience. It can be easily heated and eaten whenever and wherever people are pleased. For instance, people who have left their work very late at night often buy ready to eat foods like instant noodles because of time restriction. Despite the advantages, there is also a drawback of processed foods which it contains too many chemical preservatives. These foods are full of additives that are often used to improve the flavour, shelf life that keep them more appealing. As per health studies, the presence of these chemicals can contribute to health conditions such as heart problems, high blood pressure, kidney and liver problems. In conclusion, there is an increasing demand of ready to eat foods than cooking fresh foods nowadays. The advantages of eating and buying processed foods can save time and it gives convenience to busy people who do not have much time to buy, prepare, and cook for themselves. However, eating too much of these foods can make us ill as it contains a lot of chemical preservatives. In my own perspective, this has more advantages than its drawbacks as long as people can control their food intake.
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people
are inclined
in buying towards ready-made
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foods
than fresh cooked
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foods
. In my
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own
point of view, this development has more
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advantages
than its disadvantages. This essay will
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explain
further
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details
.

Convenience
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foods
become
widely
popular among
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teenagers
, bachelors, working
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people
and
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people
living in apartments as it saves
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time
of meal preparation at home. Buying ingredients have been already
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time consuming
in itself, as is the preparation and cooking process. Most of these
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foods
take less than five to ten minutes
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only
to cook.
Additionally
, purchasing ready-made
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foods
offer convenience. It can be
easily
heated and eaten whenever and wherever
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people
are
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pleased
.
For instance
,
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people
who have
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left
their work
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very
late at night
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often
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buy
ready to eat
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foods
like instant noodles
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because
of
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time
restriction.

Despite the
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advantages
, there is
also
a drawback of processed
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foods
which it contains too
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many
chemical preservatives. These
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foods
are full of additives that are
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often
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used
to
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improve
the
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flavour
, shelf life that
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keep
them more appealing. As per health studies, the presence of these chemicals can contribute to health conditions such as heart problems, high blood pressure, kidney and liver problems.

In conclusion
, there is an increasing demand of ready to eat
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foods
than cooking fresh
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foods
nowadays. The
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advantages
of eating and buying processed
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foods
can save
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time
and it gives convenience to busy
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people
who do not have much
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time
to
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buy
, prepare, and cook for themselves.
However
, eating too much of these
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foods
can
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make
us ill as it contains
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a lot of
chemical preservatives. In my
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own
perspective, this has more
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advantages
than its drawbacks as long as
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people
can control their
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food
intake.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay : It is better to marry someone who is similar to you, rather than someone who is different from you. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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