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At present the media affects people lives significantly. what impact on the societies? is it negative or positive development. v.1

At present the media affects people lives significantly. what impact on the societies? is it negative or positive development. v. 1
The media has a significant effect on the way people lives their life. This essay will discuss how the media shapes how people think about world events and suggest it is negative development. Most people take newspaper and Televisiin news at face value and donot think about it veey criticaly. This loads to them beliving every thing they read or hear on Television and Reforama. This can have a serious impact an how they view the world and can lead a group of society members having a distouted views preception prospects or certain key issue. Take the current refuse cresis as a their Indian press reported the refugese as " migrants" how where looking advantage of their relative economic prospertry, when in realaty these people, were simply fluging bettle town countries and had no othee choice but to live. The distotion means that government and corporation can influence the media and get them to spin a narative that suito their agents agenda. Which is very danger for democracy. A healthy democracy must have a press that is gitical of the state and big business and if it does not, democracy will be peril davgresus. For examply it has been shown the fox news regularly tells lie the democratic Party and seeks to support the republican party, which is very disturbing when you considee that millions people cross the world tune into fox news every day. To sum up, the media effects over views of the world you telling us but to think and endless people makeuo their own mind rather than blindly beliving what over they hear and road, democracy is threatend.
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has a significant effect on the way
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lives
their life. This essay will discuss how the
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media
shapes how
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people
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think
about
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world
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events
and suggest it is
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negative
development.

Most
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people
take newspaper and
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Televisiin
news at face value and
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donot
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think
about it
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veey
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criticaly
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beliving
every thing they read or hear on Television and
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Reforama
. This can have a serious impact
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how they view the
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world
and can lead a group of society members having a
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distouted
views
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preception
prospects or certain key issue. Take the
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prospertry
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realaty
these
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, were
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fluging
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choice
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.

The
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means that
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government
and corporation can influence the
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media
and
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get
them to spin a
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narative
that
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suito
their agents agenda. Which is
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very
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danger
for
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democracy
. A healthy
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democracy
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must
have a press
that is
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gitical
of the state and
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big
business and if it does not,
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democracy
will be peril
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davgresus
. For
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examply
it has
been shown
the
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fox news
regularly
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tells
lie the
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democratic Party
and seeks to support the
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republican party
, which is
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disturbing when you
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considee
that millions
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people
cross the
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world
tune into
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fox news
every day.

To sum up, the
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effects over views of the
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world
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you telling
us
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but
to
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think
and endless
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people
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makeuo
their
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own
mind
rather
than
blindly
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beliving
what over they hear and road,
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democracy
is
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threatend
.
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18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
35Mistakes

IELTS essay At present the media affects people lives significantly. what impact on the societies? is it negative or positive development. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
272 words
6.0
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