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Advertisers often try to sell you things by exaggerating about the quality of their products. It helps them get your attention. And exaggeration in advertising is usually considered acceptable, but not always. In the United States, there are laws to help v.1

Advertisers often try to sell you things by exaggerating about the quality of their products. It helps them get your attention. And exaggeration in advertising is usually considered acceptable, but not always. In the United States, there are laws to help v. 1
Everyday a significant number of waste materials are being produced through household chores which do not get recycled unfortunately. A group of people believes that government has the sole responsibility to reprocess the garbage by ensuring proper law and order. This essay will explain why government is indeed accountable for implementing the legislative process in order to increase reuse of waste items. Today's modern life requires people to use a material amount of disposable materials like plastic, polythene and paper materials for the purpose of packaging goods, takeaway of food and wrapping of different portable items. Once these wastage items have been used, they are simply thrown into the specific place for garbage disposal. Usually, the concern cleaning authority simply collects the rubbish and sends them to the specific place for land filling. To elaborate further, a group of researchers at Stanford University revealed in a recent journal that above 1200 pounds rubbish is thrown by an American on average each year which never gets the scope to recycle. In connection with the problem stated in the previous paragraph, many suggest that recycling of entire trash materials is not possible unless the government passes strong rule in support of the idea and the implementation of this idea has become an absolute imperative under the current global context. In order to avoid worldwide pollution, decaying of soil, lack of dwelling areas for people and to ensure proper utilization of every valuable material, every government must come forward to urgently enact law to ensure reusing of all the rubbish items. For example, Germany, Austria, South Korea and Switzerland are the four countries that have been successful in recycling their household wastes up to 55% only by effectively validating the law of the country. Although the responsible act of citizens matter to a great extent, it is the authority that ought to perform its legal duties first. To sum up, smart and efficient waste management has become a global phenomenon in the past few decades. To achieve a measurable milestone, the administration of each country has to design and authorize regulation so that domestic rubbish can be usefully reprocessed and thus reused for beneficial purposes.
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Everyday
a significant number of
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waste
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materials
are
being produced
through household chores which do not
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get
recycled unfortunately. A group of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
believes that
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government
has the sole responsibility to reprocess the garbage by ensuring proper law and order. This essay will
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explain
why
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government
is
indeed
accountable for implementing the legislative process in order to increase reuse of
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waste
items.

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Today
's modern life requires
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people
to
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use
a
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material
amount of disposable
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materials
like plastic, polythene and paper
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materials
for the purpose of packaging
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goods
, takeaway of food and wrapping of
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different
portable items. Once these wastage items have been
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used
, they are
simply
thrown into the specific place for garbage disposal.
Usually
, the concern cleaning authority
simply
collects the
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rubbish
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sends
them to the specific place for land filling. To elaborate
further
, a group of researchers at Stanford University revealed in a recent journal that above
Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.
1200 pounds
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rubbish
is thrown
by an American on average each year which never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
the scope to recycle.

In connection with the problem stated in the previous paragraph,
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many
suggest that recycling of entire trash
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materials
is not possible unless the
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government
passes strong
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rule
in support of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
and the implementation of this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
has become an absolute imperative under the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
global context. In order to avoid worldwide pollution, decaying of soil, lack of dwelling areas for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
and to ensure proper utilization of every valuable
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material
, every
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government
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
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come
forward to
urgently
enact law to ensure reusing of all the
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rubbish
items.
For example
, Germany, Austria, South Korea and Switzerland are the four countries that have been successful in recycling their household
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wastes
up to 55%
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
by
effectively
validating the law of the country. Although the responsible act of citizens matter to a great extent, it is the authority that ought to perform its legal duties
first
.

To sum up, smart and efficient
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
management has become a global phenomenon in the past few decades. To achieve a measurable milestone, the administration of each country
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
has to
design and authorize regulation
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that domestic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rubbish
can be
usefully
reprocessed and
thus
reused for beneficial purposes.
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IELTS essay Advertisers often try to sell you things by exaggerating about the quality of their products. It helps them get your attention. And exaggeration in advertising is usually considered acceptable, but not always. In the United States, there are laws to help v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
362 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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