Male student Carrie, how come I always see you eating in the cafeteria lately? Didn’t you tell me you had a kitchen in your dorm and you were gonna start to. . . Female student Uh-huh. . . and I was gonna start cooking my own meals there. Male student S v.1
Male student Carrie, how come I always see you eating in the cafeteria lately? Didn’t you tell me you had a kitchen in your dorm and you were gonna start to. . . Female student Uh-huh. . . and I was gonna start cooking my own meals there. Male student S v. 1
There are some nations where criminal trials telecast on television to make people able to get information about that. It has both pros as well as cons, and a few of them are discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.
On the one hand, if the hearing and judgment of a case in court is seen directly, it can provide great knowledge of all the legal procedures that take place in that hall, likewise how the trial starts, runs, and ends. If people witness this scene, they will know how a judge examines a case and what factors lead to the punishment for the crime. Such kind of information is only available to the students pursuing Law; however, with this exercise, it can be accessed by everybody.
On the other hand, for children, it may not benefit. If youngsters watch the trial, they may get influenced by the criminals how they committed that specific crime. Most of the criminals are not guilty of their doings, so it can inspire youth, especially teenagers, to be like them. They can get knowledge of the plethora of ways to hoodwink the police officers and eventually become a criminal.
To sum up, making a judgment in a court available to watch for the general public can have both positive and negative effects. It can make people more knowledgeable about the law, and at the same time, it can also inspire juvenile crime. Hence, in my opinion, the government should not show such kind of activities on TV to everyone, but there should be an age restriction on its access
There are  
some
 nations where criminal trials telecast on television to  
make
  people
 able to  
get
 information about that. It has both pros  
as well as
 cons, and a few of them  
are discussed
 in the subsequent paragraphs.
On the one hand, if the hearing and judgment of a case in court is  
seen
  directly
, it can provide great knowledge of all the legal procedures that take place in that hall,  
likewise
 how the trial  
starts
, runs, and ends. If  
people
 witness this scene, they will know how a judge examines a case and what factors lead to the punishment for the crime. Such kind of information is  
only
 available to the students pursuing Law;  
however
, with this exercise, it can  
be accessed
 by everybody. 
On the other hand
, for children, it may not benefit. If youngsters  
watch
 the trial, they may  
get
 influenced by the criminals how they committed that specific crime. Most of the criminals are not guilty of their doings,  
so
 it can inspire youth,  
especially
  teenagers
, to be like them. They can  
get
 knowledge of the plethora of ways to hoodwink the police officers and  
eventually
 become a criminal.
To sum up, making a judgment in a court available to  
watch
 for the  
general public
 can have both  
positive
 and  
negative
 effects. It can  
make
  people
 more knowledgeable about the law, and at the same time, it can  
also
 inspire juvenile crime.  
Hence
, in my opinion, the  
government
 should not  
show
 such kind of activities on TV to everyone,  
but
 there should be an age restriction on its access
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