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As population growth around the regionorestrvation of natural areas or is their destruction an inevitable consequence of population growth Support your view v.2

As population growth around the regionorestrvation of natural areas or is their destruction an inevitable consequence of population growth Support your view v. 2
Since the end of World War II, sume that governmral areas. First of all, forests and jungles should be conserved due to the stable economic development. It is an indisputable fact that forests supply valuable resources needed for economic sectors namely agriculture, industry and service. Not only do forests provide land for agriculture but they are also sources of p for the sake of sufficient input for economic fields. As population growth around the regionorestrvation of natural areas or is their destruction an inevitable consequence of population growth. Support your view. As population growth around the regionorestrvation of natural areas or is their destruction an inevitable consequence of population growth. Support your view. As population growth around the regionorestrvation of natural areas or is their destrucround the regionorestrvation of natural areas or is their destruction an inevitable consequence of population growth. Support your view. Secondly, on moral ground, as huma other creatures. Forests have a vital role to play in the protection of biodiversity. The loss of lently may result in the violation of biographical system. Last but not least, the preservatio By ways of conclusion, nature development of urpted to lessen the tremendous pressure on land use and natural resources.
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end
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sume
that
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governmral
areas.

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First of all
,
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forests
and jungles should
be conserved
due to the stable economic development. It is an indisputable fact that
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forests
supply valuable resources needed for economic sectors
namely
agriculture, industry and service. Not
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only
do
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forests
provide land for agriculture
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but
they are
also
sources of p for the sake of sufficient input for economic fields. As
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population
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growth
around the
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regionorestrvation
of
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natural
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areas
or is their destruction an inevitable consequence of
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population
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growth
. Support your view. As
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population
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growth
around the
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regionorestrvation
of
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natural
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areas
or is their destruction an inevitable consequence of
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population
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growth
. Support your view. As
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population
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growth
around the
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regionorestrvation
of
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natural
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areas
or is their
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destrucround
the
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regionorestrvation
of
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natural
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areas
or is their destruction an inevitable consequence of
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population
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
growth
. Support your view.

Secondly
, on moral ground, as
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huma
other creatures.
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Forests
have a vital role to play in the protection of biodiversity. The loss of
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lently
may result in the violation of biographical system.

Last
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but
not least, the
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preservatio


By ways of conclusion, nature development of
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urpted
to lessen the tremendous pressure on land
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use
and
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natural
resources.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
25Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes
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IELTS essay As population growth around the regionorestrvation of natural areas or is their destruction an inevitable consequence of population growth Support your view v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
201 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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