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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. what factors contribute to job satisfaction? how realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers. v.6

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. what factors contribute to job satisfaction? how realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers. v. 6
It is true that lot of people spend their major part of life time at work, Being content with job is the imperative element for personal well being. As there are variety of reasons to have job satisfaction, However, it's not possible for every worker to be satisfied with their work. It is a irrefutable fact that job satisfaction is a dream for many because we are heading towards a very competative lifestyle. Firstly, earning high salaries in order to have a comfortable life is a wish of everyone, so they can effort good housing, clothing, food and best medical. For example, people who earn high salaries are more likely to have better living in terms of quality and comfort. Secondly, job security is another key reason to be relived from any worries rather than stressing about loosing job anytime. Finally, strict work atmosphere is also a serious matter for many because of which employees crave for pressure free workplace. Although, all the above, are highly inevitable in the real world. If an employee is content with one particular aspect of work than he or she will not be fine with another. The main reason for this is every employee is not versatile, so the employer will never pay high salary for the medicore one. For instance, Doctors pay scale in India is 50 times higher than any cleaner of the hospital. So it is absurd to aim high pay for every profession which means having everything that employees need at work is impossible for everyone in realistic globe. Therefore, it is not possible to have compelete contentment in job for everyone. In conclusion, As adults spent most of their life at work, job satisfaction is considered as the main reason for staying happy in life which consists of various factors such as high pay and comfort, but it is illogical for every worker to have it.
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people
spend their major part of
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life time
at
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work
, Being content with
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job
is the imperative element for personal
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well being
. As there are variety of
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reasons
to have
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job
satisfaction,
However
, it's not possible for every worker to
be satisfied
with their work.

It is
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a
irrefutable fact that
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job
satisfaction is a dream for
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many
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because
we are heading towards a
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very
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competative
lifestyle.
Firstly
, earning
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high
salaries in order to have a comfortable
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life
is a wish of everyone,
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so
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can effort
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good
housing, clothing, food and best medical.
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,
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people
who earn
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high
salaries are more likely to have better living in terms of quality and comfort.
Secondly
,
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job
security is another key
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reason
to
be relived
from any worries
rather
than stressing about loosing
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job
anytime.
Finally
, strict
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work
atmosphere is
also
a serious matter for
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many
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because
of which
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employees
crave for pressure free workplace.

Although, all the above, are
highly
inevitable in the real world. If an
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employee
is content with one particular aspect of
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work
than he or she will not be fine with another. The main
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reason
for this is every
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employee
is not versatile,
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so
the employer will never
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pay
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high
salary for the
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medicore
one.
For instance
, Doctors
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pay
scale in India is 50 times higher than any cleaner of the hospital.
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So
it is absurd to aim
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high
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pay
for every profession which means having everything that
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employees
need at
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work
is impossible for everyone in realistic globe.
Therefore
, it is not possible to have
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compelete
contentment in
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job
for everyone.

In conclusion
, As adults spent most of their
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life
at
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work
,
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job
satisfaction
is considered
as the main
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reason
for staying happy in
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life
which consists of various factors such as
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high
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pay
and comfort,
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but
it is illogical for every worker to have it.
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33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. what factors contribute to job satisfaction? how realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers. v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
317 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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