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Many parents think that it is good to help children in their homework, but others think parents should not do that and it is their own duty. Discuss both and give your opinion. v.1

Many parents think that it is good to help children in their homework, but others think parents should not do that and it is their own duty. v. 1
Parental involvement is considered by some to be beneficial when it comes to children' s homework. Nevertheless, others argue that this is detrimental to the children' s education and they are the ones responsible for doing their homework on their own. In my opinion, helping youngsters with their homework is useful to a certain degree, as long as it is not something to do on a regular basis. On the one hand, most children do not perform well in all the subjects. They might find it unattainable to grasp every single piece of information taught in the class. Furthermore, some teachers employ old-fashioned teaching methods which can be inappropriate for the pupils' age. Lack of interest in certain subjects is also likely to contribute to the youngster' s state of bewilderment. All these can make the children feel incapable of doing his or her homework. In this case, the child is bound to ask his parents for assistance, which is perfectly understandable. Most parents are aware of the many requirements that the school teachers have because they were also students at some point in time. Thereby, they empathize with their child and consider that helping them with their homework will only improve the situation and will not cause any harm. On the other hand, the teaching approach has changed significantly over the last period of time. Consequently, parents' knowledge and solving methods might not correspond to the way subjects are taught today. Helping the children with their homework could get them even more confused. Parents should support children to ask their teachers or classmates questions at school in case they did not understand something related to a particular lesson. Children need to become rather independent so as to solve whatever problem they encounter not only at school, but in life. To conclude, I have mixed feelings on the matter in question. I strongly believe that children have to pay as much attention as they can during the classes, considering that homework is usually based on what it was taught at school in that day. With regard to the parents, they will ensure that the teaching methods they employ, when helping their child doing his or her homework, are according to those at school, if they want to be helpful
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to be beneficial when it
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children&
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homework
.
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, others argue that this is detrimental to the
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education and
they are the ones responsible for doing their
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homework
on their
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own
. In my opinion, helping youngsters with their
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homework
is useful to a certain degree, as long as it is not something to do on a regular basis.

On the one hand, most
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children
do not perform well in all the subjects. They might find it unattainable to grasp every single piece of information taught in the
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class
.
Furthermore
,
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some
teachers employ
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old
-fashioned teaching methods which can be inappropriate for the
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pupils&
#039; age. Lack of interest in certain subjects is
also
likely to contribute to the
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youngster&
#039; s state of bewilderment. All these can
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make
the
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children
feel incapable of doing
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his or her
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homework
.
In this case
, the child
is bound
to ask his
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parents
for assistance, which is
perfectly
understandable. Most
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parents
are aware of the
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many
requirements that the
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school
teachers have
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because
they were
also
students at
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some
point in time. Thereby, they empathize with their child and consider that helping them with their
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homework
will
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only
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improve
the situation and will not cause any harm.

On the other hand
, the teaching approach has
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changed
significantly
over the last period of time.
Consequently
,
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parents&
#039; knowledge and solving methods might not correspond to the way subjects
are taught
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today
. Helping the
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children
with their
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homework
could
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get
them even more confused.
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Parents
should support
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children
to ask their teachers or classmates questions at
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school
in case they did not understand something related to a particular lesson.
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Children
need to become
rather
independent
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so as to
solve whatever problem they encounter not
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only
at
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school
,
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but
in life.

To conclude
, I have mixed feelings on the matter in question. I
strongly
believe that
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children
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have to
pay as much attention as they can during the classes, considering that
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homework
is
usually
based on what it
was taught
at
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school
in that day. With regard to the
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parents
, they will ensure that the teaching methods they employ, when helping their child doing
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his or her
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homework
, are according to those at
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school
, if they want to be
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helpful
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26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Many parents think that it is good to help children in their homework, but others think parents should not do that and it is their own duty. v. 1

Essay
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4 paragraphs
378 words
6.0
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