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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work. Job satisfaction is an important element of individual well being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? v.1

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work. Job satisfaction is an important element of individual well being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? v. 1
Work fulfilment can play an important rule in the workplace. The majority of the persons are spending their big amount of lifespan in the job field and work happiness is a very crucial part of everyones life. This essay will be talking about the vital component of a position enjoyment in earlier life and the reality of the work fulfils for each and every one. Initially, two main reasons are responsible for the enjoyment of the prospective field of the act. The posting environment is the most important thing to feel good. For example, some places women do not get a safe zone to do their task properly and several times they like to get harassed by their colleague. And, the Quality wage is another big concern about the issue. When any people cannot make their basic things well, then the situation never is effective because they will have to fight with their life basic needs always. However, all types of jobholders can expect the fulfilment of their task. It is a very fundamental activity to perform well in the work station. For instance, I had a good job with good pay, but I quit the thing because of the reality that I could not get a fully better thing with my employers, although, they gave me sufficient amount. If I could achieve the target of mine, after that, it might be that I would have remained the job still now. So it is essential for any person in any circumstances. In conclusion, some key point is necessary to have the best post area and it is the primary criteria for having any employees' lives. Since human being spends their priceless adult age and will power behind the career, so they must have tasked enjoyment and it is should be mandatory for every single one.
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in the workplace. The majority of the persons are spending their
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crucial part of
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everyones
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each and every one
.

Initially
, two main reasons are responsible for the enjoyment of the prospective field of the act. The posting environment is the most
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important
thing to feel
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good
.
For example
,
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some
places women do not
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get
a safe zone to do their task
properly
and several times they like to
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get
harassed by their colleague. And, the Quality wage is another
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big
concern about the issue. When any
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people
cannot
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make
their basic things well, then the situation never is effective
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because
they will
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have to
fight with their life basic needs always.

However
, all types of jobholders can
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expect
the
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fulfilment
of their task. It is a
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very
fundamental activity to perform well in the
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work
station.
For instance
, I had a
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good
job with
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good
pay,
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but
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of the reality that I could not
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get
a
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better thing with my employers, although, they gave me sufficient amount. If I could achieve the target of mine, after that, it might be that I would have remained the job
still
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now
.
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it is essential for any person in any circumstances.

In conclusion
,
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some
key point is necessary to have the best post area and it is the primary criteria for having any employees'
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lives
. Since human being spends their priceless adult age and will power behind the career,
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so
they
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must
have tasked enjoyment and it
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is
should be mandatory for every single one.
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IELTS essay As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work. Job satisfaction is an important element of individual well being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
305 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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