Many big cities around the globe has been economically significant developing. However, this development also brings several detrimental impact on junior citizens and some solutions should be taken to address those problems.
Many surveys have shown downsides of young people developments caused by growing cities. First off, major municipals have a tendency to remove public spaces such as parks and squares to make place for skyscraper office buildings due to the economic growing demands. Therefore, offspring do not have public areas for outdoor activities. They cannot socialize and play outdoor games in public zones which might lead to isolation by interacting with peers via technological gadgets. Secondly, pollution is increased as the high as the city developments. Polluted air from factories and vehicles exhaust emissions and polluted noise from traffic congestion would bring health related diseases such as insomnia, disruptive sleep and concentration. This definitely negatively affect children development, especially at their early stage because offspring do not have sufficient sleep and lack focus on studying.
Nevertheless, these problems mentioned above are solvable. Local government should encourage big businesses and companies to relocate from cities to rural areas. Hence, the volume of traffic jams and air pollution would be decreased in cities. Furthermore, public places and residential areas with outdoor spaces should be constructed accordingly to offer safe zones to make way for children entertainment zones. Thus, the balance between living areas with sufficient conditions for the growth of children and working areas would be a sustainable economic and young people development.
In conclusion, problems brought by cities developments to the youth can be solved in several ways.
Many
big
cities
around the globe has been
economically
significant developing.
However
, this
development
also
brings several detrimental impact on junior citizens and
some
solutions should
be taken
to address those problems.
Many
surveys have shown downsides of young
people
developments
caused by growing
cities
.
First
off, major municipals have a tendency to remove
public
spaces such as parks and squares to
make
place for skyscraper office buildings due to the economic growing demands.
Therefore
, offspring do not have
public
areas
for outdoor activities. They cannot socialize and play outdoor games in
public
zones which might lead to isolation by interacting with peers via technological gadgets.
Secondly
, pollution
is increased
as the high as the city
developments
. Polluted air from factories and vehicles exhaust emissions and polluted noise from traffic congestion would bring health related diseases such as insomnia, disruptive sleep and concentration. This definitely
negatively
affect children
development
,
especially
at their early stage
because
offspring do not have sufficient sleep and lack focus on studying.
Nevertheless
, these problems mentioned above are solvable. Local
government
should encourage
big
businesses and
companies
to relocate from
cities
to rural
areas
.
Hence
, the volume of traffic jams and air pollution would
be decreased
in
cities
.
Furthermore
,
public
places and residential
areas
with outdoor spaces should
be constructed
accordingly
to offer safe zones to
make
way for children entertainment zones.
Thus
, the balance between living
areas
with sufficient conditions for the growth of children and working
areas
would be a sustainable economic and young
people
development.
In conclusion
, problems brought by
cities
developments
to the youth can
be solved
in several ways.
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