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As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes. Why does this happen? How does this affect society?

As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes. Why does this happen? How does this affect society? v. 5
Nowadays, the small family in trend because countries have been developed. There are some causes and effects on society of this situation. These days, most people prefer to live in a nuclear family rather than a joint family because of the rise in the level of education high in developed countries. due to hectic work, they do not have a lot of time for the huge number of family members. They firstly prefer to their work as they want to better future so they choose to live in small family size. For example, in Japan most, individuals do not get married Because they can't bear the cost of children. There are some effects on society due to living in small size family. the developed country mostly provided well facility because there is less population. so people take a better education and some more beneficial facility.
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IELTS essay As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes. Why does this happen? How does this affect society?

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