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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. v.2

Evolution of computers have changed the universe drastically. Recently, computers are being used in our education system too which may result in extinction of teaching profession. According to my opinion, computers are a blessing in various fields. For instance, our new generation has the recent technologies to use for their education. These techniques results in fast learning and easier way to learn. However as per studies, all the new generation apps affect the children's brain developing resulting in psychological and physical illness. Hence, over usage of computers may be a disaster later. Moreover, children have new learning apps over the internet for their education. This is in addition to the teachers class in school. These apps feel more interesting and attractive to students than a teachers teaching in a classroom which results in loosing interest in a teachers class. Hence, sooner or later the teachers might loose their profession. In conclusion, bringing new aspects to the world improves our society and living but it over usage of it may damage an individual's life.

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changed
 the universe drastically
. Recently, computers are being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in our education system too which may result in extinction of teaching profession.

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new
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use
 for their education. These techniques results in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
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 as per studies, all the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 generation apps affect the children's brain developing resulting in psychological and physical illness. Hence
, over usage of computers may be a disaster later.

Moreover
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new
 learning apps over the internet for their education. This is in addition
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
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class
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teachers
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teachers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
. Hence
, sooner or later the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
teachers
 might loose their profession.

In conclusion
, bringing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
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improves
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but
 it over usage of it may damage an individual's life. 