Nowadays, it has been observed that traffic congestion is a big problem all over the world. Either authorities should build the best network facility of public shipment over the road. A lion’s share of people favour in it, however rest go averse it. I agree with the central idea, the government should improve the public transport system. The following paragraph would highlight my perspectives along with an apt example.
To begin with, there are a number of factors in favour of my view, but the most important is that in metropolitan cities public transportation is the key factor of mass transit. It is one of the part of master planning when the city’s come under consideration. Mass transportation such as metro and bus helps the government to reduce the count of plying vehicle on the road as a consequence the street has become gridlock free. For instance, Australia has maximum metro trains and buses in the world that not only provide the real-time service at each and every stop to their citizen but
also provide the Internet facility in the public shipping. It might attract the people to use the public transportation maximum. Hence, traffic snarls improve in the city.
On the contrary, I also have to embrace the existence of private vehicles. Expanding the roads would ease the traffic, but emission of toxic gases of the vehicle causes global warming as a result issue of pollution is proliferating since the past few decades.
Eventually I would like to infer that improvement in the public transport is more beneficial for making the environment eco-friendly as I outlined above.
Nowadays, it has
been observed
that traffic congestion is a
big
problem all over the world. Either authorities should build the best network facility of
public
shipment over the road. A lion’s share of
people
favour
in it,
however
rest go averse it. I
agree
with the central
idea
, the
government
should
improve
the
public
transport system. The following paragraph would highlight my perspectives along with an apt example.
To
begin
with, there are a number of factors in
favour
of my view,
but
the most
important
is that in metropolitan cities
public
transportation is the key factor of mass transit. It is one of the part of master planning when the city’s
come
under consideration. Mass transportation such as metro and bus
helps
the
government
to
reduce
the count of plying vehicle on the road as a consequence the street has become gridlock free.
For instance
, Australia has maximum metro trains and buses in the world that not
only
provide the real-time service at each and every
stop
to their citizen
but
also
provide the Internet facility in the
public
shipping. It might attract the
people
to
use
the
public
transportation maximum.
Hence
, traffic snarls
improve
in the city.
On the contrary
, I
also
have to
embrace the existence of private vehicles. Expanding the roads would
ease
the traffic,
but
emission of toxic gases of the vehicle causes global warming
as a result
issue of pollution is proliferating since the past few decades.
Eventually
I would like to infer that improvement in the
public
transport is more beneficial for making the environment eco-friendly as I outlined above.
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