Many people believe that the death penalty is necessary to keep the security system efficient in the society. While there are some negative aspects of capital punishment, I agree with the view that without it we will become more vulnerable to violence.
The death penalty can be considered unsuitable punishment for several reasons. The strongest argument is that we have no rights to kill other humans. Right to live is the basic right of any human being, and no one can infringe this right, irrespective of the person’s deeds. Moreover, innocent people can face wrongful execution. Such unfair sentences take away lives of innocent people and make other citizens lose faith in law and justice. And besides, sometimes criminals repent of their acts. In this case they should be given a second chance to improve themselves.
However, I believe that capital punishment is necessary in the society. Firstly, it is an effective deterrent of major crimes. The best method to prevent a person from committing crime is to show the consequences of his or her actions. For example, the government of Pakistan has controlled the rate of terrorism by enforcing death penalties for the members of terrorist organisations. Secondly, the governments spend large sums of national budget on maintenance of prisoners. Instead, this money can be used for the development of the society and welfare of the people.
To sum up, although capital punishment has some disadvantages, I think that it proves to be the best way of controlling criminals, lessening governmental expenses and preventing other people from doing crimes.
Many
people
believe that the death penalty is necessary to
keep
the security system efficient in the society. While there are
some
negative
aspects of capital
punishment
, I
agree
with the view that without
it
we will become more vulnerable to violence.
The death penalty can
be considered
unsuitable
punishment
for several reasons. The strongest argument is that we have no
rights
to kill other humans.
Right
to
live
is the basic
right
of any human being, and no one can infringe this
right
, irrespective of the person’s deeds.
Moreover
, innocent
people
can face wrongful execution. Such unfair sentences take away
lives
of innocent
people
and
make
other citizens lose faith in law and justice. And
besides
,
sometimes
criminals repent of their acts.
In this case
they should be
given
a second chance to
improve
themselves.
However
, I believe that capital
punishment
is necessary in the society.
Firstly
, it is an effective deterrent of major crimes. The best method to
prevent
a person from committing crime is to
show
the consequences of
his or her
actions.
For example
, the
government
of Pakistan has controlled the rate of terrorism by enforcing death penalties for the members of terrorist
organisations
.
Secondly
, the
governments
spend large sums of national budget on maintenance of prisoners.
Instead
, this money can be
used
for the development of the society and welfare of the
people
.
To sum up, although capital
punishment
has
some
disadvantages, I
think
that it proves to be the best way of controlling criminals, lessening governmental expenses and preventing other
people
from doing crimes.
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