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Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.14

Artists express creatively through their works. Some people believe that the art of these individuals must freely reflect what it is in their minds. This essay states that while creators are free to express their most inner views on a topic, they should not use that freedom to offend any social group. Creators use their artistic products in order to express their opinions. They offer others unique standpoints and, for that reason, they have the liberty to express their personal opinions through their works. For example, Botello decided to utilize fat people as his signature and these individuals are portrayed doing everyday chores in his paintings. Throughout his art, the aforementioned artist debunked the myths that fat people are lazy and ugly. Since in this artist´s representations the protagonists are realistically painted and usually moving, fat people are conveyed as active and beautiful. Throughout his art, Botello depicted overweight people closer to reality. Although art creators are free to express their standpoints on several topics, their works must not be offensive towards any social group since the basis of a society is respect and artists can always express their views in non-offensive ways. For example, a creator can express the terrible damages committed against Jews during the Holocaust in a respectful manner without recriminating new generations of Germans about the wrongdoings of only a minority of people. Art can be socially powerful and, yet, respectful. Beauty is an essential part of the art. Artists are free to convey their opinions in their works, but they must do so in a respectful manner because respect is the basis of a harmonious society.
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people
believe that the
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art
of these individuals
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reflect what it is in their minds. This essay states that while creators are free to
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express
their most inner views on a topic, they should not
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use
that freedom to offend any social group.

Creators
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use
their artistic products in order to
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express
their opinions. They offer others unique standpoints and, for that reason, they have the liberty to
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express
their personal opinions through their works.
For example
,
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Botello
decided to utilize
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fat
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people
as his signature and these individuals
are portrayed
doing everyday chores in his paintings. Throughout his
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art
, the aforementioned
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artist
debunked the myths that
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fat
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people
are lazy and ugly. Since in this
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artist´s
representations the protagonists are
realistically
painted and
usually
moving,
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fat
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people
are conveyed
as active and
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beautiful
. Throughout his
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art
,
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Botello
depicted overweight
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people
closer to reality.

Although
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art
creators are free to
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express
their standpoints on several topics, their works
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must
not be offensive towards any social group since the basis of a society is respect and
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artists
can always
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express
their views in non-offensive ways.
For example
, a creator can
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express
the terrible damages committed against Jews during the Holocaust
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in a respectful manner
without recriminating new generations of Germans about the wrongdoings of
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only
a minority of
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people
.
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Art
can be
socially
powerful and,
yet
, respectful.

Beauty is an essential part of the
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art
.
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Artists
are free to convey their opinions in their works,
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but
they
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must
do
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so
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in a respectful manner
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because
respect is the basis of a harmonious society.
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IELTS essay 2. Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas.

Essay
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4 paragraphs
271 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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