Art is considered an important part of a society as well as an expression of its culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art? Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects? v.10
Art is considered an important part of a society as well as an expression of its culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art? Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects? v. 10
There is no doubt that educational curriculums can play a pivotal role in children's development. However, the question: what is the best subjects which should be taught to students? Is considered one of the most controversial issues today. Although I think that it is crucial for young generations to be taught art, I do believe that students should study other subjects.
On one hand, the enthusiasts of educating art might argue that it can develop children's innovation. This is because such a subject would allow pupils to discover their skills. For example, teaching art in Egyptian schools is obligatory. As a consequence, Egypt now has many artists in different fields. In contrast, If students do not study art, there will be fewer artists in society.
On the other hand, I would think that scientific subjects might be relatively more important. The reason for this is that not only it can broaden the students' horizon about current technologies, but it also instills scientific skills in the students. For instance, this is can be seen by the growing number of young scientists in Japan, which provide the students with all needed scientific tools. Conversely, if governments did not teach such scientific subjects, countries would remain among developing countries.
In conclusion, despite the fact that there are many benefits of studying art, such as expanding young's imagination, it is my firm belief that it is very vital for students to be taught both art and other subjects, such as history and computer science.
There is no doubt that educational curriculums can play a pivotal role in children's development.
However
, the question: what is the best
subjects
which should
be taught
to
students
?
Is considered
one of the most controversial issues
today
. Although I
think
that it is crucial for young generations to
be taught
art
, I do believe that
students
should study other subjects.
On one hand, the enthusiasts of educating
art
might argue that it can develop children's innovation. This is
because
such a
subject
would
allow
pupils to discover their
skills
.
For example
, teaching
art
in Egyptian schools is obligatory. As a consequence, Egypt
now
has
many
artists in
different
fields.
In contrast
, If
students
do not study
art
, there will be fewer artists in society.
On the other hand
, I would
think
that
scientific
subjects
might be
relatively
more
important
.
The reason for this is
that not
only
it can broaden the students' horizon about
current
technologies,
but
it
also
instills
scientific
skills
in the
students
.
For instance
, this is can be
seen
by the growing number of young scientists in Japan, which provide the
students
with all needed
scientific
tools.
Conversely
, if
governments
did not teach such
scientific
subjects
, countries would remain among
developing countries
.
In conclusion
, despite the fact that there are
many
benefits of studying
art
, such as expanding young's imagination, it is my firm belief that it is
very
vital for
students
to
be taught
both
art
and other
subjects
, such as history and computer science.
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