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" College should provide free education to everyone. " Agree or disagree with the statement. v.2

" College should provide free education to everyone. " Agree or disagree with the statement. v. 2
Education is an integral part of everyone' s life. Institutions those who provide free education and those who don’t, have their own advantages and disadvantages. However, I disagree with the idea that college should provide free education for everyone. I feel this way for few reasons which I will explore in the following essay. To begin with, any institution requires a good financial background to hire trained professors, provide student facilities for learning academic skills and sustain healthy living of the students. It is not possible for the government to fund such institution and programs with the huge amount to develop the above mentioned infrastructure. For example in India, when I was in my home town I did my high school study from the government college. We had poor dormitory facilities and old classroom setting with old methods of teaching using projectors, black boards, inefficiently trained staff, old library. Unlike this, the college from where I pursued my graduation had a relatively higher fee structure. A part of this money was utilised for campus development, like constructing a well equipped computer lab, a digital library, a fitness gym, skills lab and appointing well-trained and highly skilled professors. This helped me polish my professional skills, perform a standard detailed research and besides, i could use the gym to keep myself physically fit and healthy. This explains how fees is important for the college and the students development. Moreover, it is equally important that the underprivileged students have the benefit of studying in good Universities. In such situation, the institutes can ask the students to pay minimal fees and reward scholarships to those who are really intelligent but cannot afford the college education. For example, the fee for the medical education from our university was high which one of my friends could not afford. However, on assessing her scores of the entrance test and her interview, the university considered her as a deserving candidate for scholarship. She completed her medical education with flying colors and she is a well-known surgeon now. In conclusion, I feel the university should charge for the education programs. This is because that money is very crucial in ensuring the students with good quality necessary campus facilities and the university can give scholarship to the bright students who cannot afford the education otherwise.
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who
provide free
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education
and those
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who
don’t, have their
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own
advantages and disadvantages.
However
, I disagree with the
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idea
that college should provide free
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education
for everyone. I feel this way for few reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

To
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begin
with, any institution requires a
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good
financial background to hire trained professors, provide
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student
facilities for learning academic
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skills
and sustain healthy living of the
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students
. It is not possible for the
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government
to fund such institution and programs with the huge amount to develop the above mentioned infrastructure.
For example
in India, when I was in my home town I did my high school study from the
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government
college. We had poor dormitory facilities and
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old
classroom setting with
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old
methods of teaching using projectors, black boards,
inefficiently
trained staff,
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old
library. Unlike this, the college from where I pursued my graduation had a
relatively
higher
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fee
structure. A part of this money was
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utilised
for campus development, like constructing a
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well equipped
computer lab, a digital library, a fitness gym,
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skills
lab and appointing well-trained and
highly
skilled professors. This
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helped
me polish my professional
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skills
, perform a standard detailed research and
besides
,
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i
could
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use
the gym to
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keep
myself
physically
fit and healthy. This
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explains
how
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fees
is
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important
for the college and the
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students
development.

Moreover
, it is
equally
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important
that the underprivileged
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students
have the benefit of studying in
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good
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Universities
. In such situation, the institutes can ask the
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students
to pay minimal
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fees
and reward scholarships to those
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who
are
really
intelligent
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but
cannot afford the college
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education
.
For example
, the
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fee
for the medical
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education
from our
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university
was high which one of my friends could not afford.
However
, on assessing her scores of the entrance
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test
and her interview, the
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university
considered her as a deserving candidate for scholarship. She completed her medical
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education
with flying
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colors and
she is a well-known surgeon
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now
.

In conclusion
, I feel the
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university
should charge for the
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education
programs. This is
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because
that money is
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very
crucial in ensuring the
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students
with
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good
quality necessary campus facilities and the
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university
can give scholarship to the bright
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students
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who
cannot afford the
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education
otherwise
.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS essay " College should provide free education to everyone. " Agree or disagree with the statement. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
385 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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