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(Apply the Ref NO: 2009122004 in speaking title, so users can understand which topic you are talking about) v.1

(Apply the Ref NO: 2009122004 in speaking title, so users can understand which topic you are talking about) v. 1
Smart phones have become an integral part of everyone’s life. It is becoming increasingly popular for most people to communicate with each over text as compared to speaking face to face. In this essay, we will discuss a few of the reasons, along with various advantages and disadvantages. Millennials today have set the trend for interacting with the virtual world as texting makes communication easier for individuals who lack the confidence to speak in real life. The screen acts as a barrier and provides comfort for those who wish to express themselves and their opinions freely. This form of virtual communication enables people to be themselves without having to worry about the social pressure of interacting publicly. For instance, it is much to provide a negative review about a restaurant online as opposed to directly mention a chef cooking flaws in their face. While texting has its benefits, this form of communication also provides certain drawbacks. Humans in general, tend to overcome their fears by pushing themselves out of their comfort zone. If everyone were to stick to their virtual screens, then nobody would build the confidence needed to speak publicly or develop their communication skills. At present almost every profession requires some form of face-to-face interaction. It is vital for people to enhance these skills as it may have an adverse effect on them in the near future. For instance, it is mandatory that retail workers possess excellent communication skills as it helps them to converse with the customer and understand their demands to offer the solution. Individuals who lack the ability to speak with confidence might face issues whilst searching for employment. In conclusion to this essay, although texting has its advantages for people with confidence issues and is an easier form of communication, It is imperative that we as individuals focus on our communication skills and develop them to prepare ourselves for future employment and utilize these skills in various aspects of life.
Smart phones have become an integral part of everyone’s life. It is becoming
increasingly
popular for most
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people
to communicate with each over text as compared to speaking
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face
to
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face
. In this essay, we will discuss a few of the reasons, along with various advantages and disadvantages.

Millennials
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today
have set the trend for interacting with the virtual world as texting
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makes
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communication
easier for individuals who lack the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
confidence
to speak in real life. The screen acts as a barrier and provides comfort for those who wish to express themselves and their opinions
freely
. This
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form
of virtual
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communication
enables
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people
to be themselves without having to worry about the social pressure of interacting
publicly
.
For instance
, it is much to provide a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
review about a restaurant online as opposed to
directly
mention a chef cooking flaws in their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
face
. While texting has its benefits, this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
form
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
also
provides certain drawbacks.

Humans
in general
, tend to overcome their fears by pushing themselves out of their comfort zone. If everyone were to stick to their virtual screens, then nobody would build the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
confidence
needed to speak
publicly
or develop their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
. At present almost every profession requires
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
form
of face-to-face interaction. It is vital for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to enhance these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
as it may have an adverse effect on them in the near future.
For instance
, it is mandatory that retail workers possess excellent
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
as it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
them to converse with the customer and understand their demands to offer the solution. Individuals who lack the ability to speak with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
confidence
might
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
face
issues whilst searching for employment.

In conclusion
to this essay, although texting has its advantages for
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people
with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
confidence
issues and is an easier
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
form
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
, It is imperative that we as individuals focus on our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
and develop them to prepare ourselves for future employment and utilize these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
in various aspects of life.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
Language comes first. It’s not that language grows out of consciousness, if you haven’t got language, you can’t be conscious.
Alan Moore

IELTS essay (Apply the Ref NO: 2009122004 in speaking title, so users can understand which topic you are talking about) v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
326 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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