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An increasing number of professionals, doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?

An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with situation? v. 5
Today’s people with a massive amount of professionals as to doctors and teachers are able to vacate to modern countries work from their own poorer areas. As a result, not only it would be breaking up the industry of society but also in other fashionable regions despite the large number of good specialists, they remain unemployed due to lack of vacancies. This essay attempts to give causes alongside some possible solutions. An undeniable reason of serious problem at some poorer countries are negative impact, such as which leads to labor shortages in the life of society industries dramatically. Later, these states can be disappeared due to inefficiency, huge debts and labor shortages. So as to solve this problem, should poorly states create any risky work-places and also modern offices for development formations. For example, if the government cannot have any great hospitals and good salaries for doctors, then they are able to be forced their own country leaved in developed other countries and do not want it. Therefore, these countries children should learn any thing else to have a higher education, as well as all of whom may have good professions and also higher salaries after to finish university rather than leave a country. Another cause of leaving to an increase in population, which leads to mutual problems and a shortage of vacancies in other countries. To be more precisely, they cannot have a good job even if all of them live in a developed city despite having a diploma because of the large population gap and good employers. It is a huge problem to create vacancies for such professionals in many work-places. The best way to combat this issue lies only at developing countries’ people are ought to learn also to work in poorly states on the grounds that they need to understand that doctors and teachers need to develop their industries and help others, not earn more. For example, in backward countries there is a need for help and the younger generation is more common, and in developed countries there are no such vacancies. So it is better to help people in a backward country than to work in a backward society with a higher education. Overall, it is better for professionals in a backward country to promote their own development and create better and more jobs than to go to work in another developed country.
Today
’s
people
with a massive amount of professionals as to doctors and teachers are able to vacate to modern
countries
work
from their
own
poorer areas.
As a result
, not
only
it would be breaking up the industry of society
but
also
in
other
fashionable regions despite the large number of
good
specialists, they remain unemployed due to lack of
vacancies
. This essay attempts to give causes alongside
some
possible solutions.

An undeniable reason of serious
problem
at
some
poorer
countries
are
negative
impact, such as which leads to labor shortages in the life of society industries
dramatically
. Later, these states can
be disappeared
due to inefficiency, huge debts and labor shortages.
So as to
solve this
problem
, should
poorly
states create any risky work-places and
also
modern offices for development formations.
For example
, if the
government
cannot have any great hospitals and
good
salaries for doctors, then they are able to
be forced
their
own
country
leaved in
developed
other
countries
and do not want it.
Therefore
, these
countries
children should learn
any thing
else to have a higher education,
as well
as all of whom may have
good
professions and
also
higher salaries after to finish university
rather
than
leave
a country.

Another cause of leaving to an increase in population, which leads to mutual
problems
and a shortage of
vacancies
in
other
countries
. To be more
precisely
, they cannot have a
good
job even if all of them
live
in a
developed
city despite having a diploma
because
of the large population gap and
good
employers. It is a huge
problem
to create
vacancies
for such professionals in
many
work-places. The best way to combat this issue lies
only
at developing
countries’
people
are ought to learn
also
to
work
in
poorly
states on the grounds that they need to understand that doctors and teachers need to develop their industries and
help
others, not earn more.
For example
, in backward
countries
there is a need for
help
and the younger generation is more common, and in
developed
countries
there are no such
vacancies
.
So
it is better to
help
people
in a backward
country
than to
work
in a backward society with a higher education.

Overall
, it is better for professionals in a backward
country
to promote their
own
development and create better and more jobs than to go to
work
in another
developed
country
.
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IELTS essay An increasing number of professionals, doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
398 words
6.0
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