It is considered that the salary is the most attractive part of an employment. But, many people argue that other aspects of a job are equally important and this essay will examine the both sides of the argument.
It is certainly true that the salary is a crucial aspect of a job in todays economic world. In fact, most people prefer highly paying employment rather than low wage rates, no matter how hard they struggle to cope with the stressful situations of a particular employment. For instance, employees tend to attract some jobs such as electricians in Sri Lanka, as they are paid smartly and may ignorant of the life threatening risk that the job carries with it because of the lack of safety precautions. Therefore salary plays a pivotal role in selecting an employment as this is an era of consumer society.
On the other hand, mere financial incentives could not bring the standards for an occupation. This means that other aspect such as job satisfaction, social stigma towards a profession and ethics are equally added a criterion for a selection of a standardized job perspective. For example, many recent study has shown that poor job satisfaction leads to the high turnover rates among nurses in world wide although they are paid attractive salaries compared to the other professions.
In conclusion, because of these reasons it can be argued and I wholeheartedly advocate that the job itself is the most important and many aspects could be considered as standardized perspective rather than salary of an occupation.
It
is considered
that the
salary
is the most attractive part of an
employment
.
But
,
many
people
argue that
other
aspects
of a
job
are
equally
important
and this essay will examine the both sides of the argument.
It is
certainly
true that the
salary
is a crucial
aspect
of a
job
in
todays
economic world. In fact, most
people
prefer
highly
paying
employment
rather
than low wage rates, no matter how
hard
they struggle to cope with the stressful situations of a particular
employment
.
For instance
, employees tend to attract
some
jobs
such as electricians in Sri Lanka, as they
are paid
smartly
and may ignorant of the life threatening
risk
that the
job
carries with it
because
of the lack of safety precautions.
Therefore
salary
plays a pivotal role in selecting an
employment
as this is an era of consumer society.
On the
other
hand, mere financial incentives could not bring the standards for an occupation. This means that
other
aspect
such as
job
satisfaction, social stigma towards a profession and ethics are
equally
added
a criterion for a selection of a standardized
job
perspective.
For example
,
many
recent study has shown that poor
job
satisfaction leads to the high turnover rates among nurses in
world wide
although they
are paid
attractive
salaries
compared to the
other
professions.
In conclusion
,
because
of these reasons it can
be argued
and I
wholeheartedly
advocate that the
job
itself is the most
important
and
many
aspects
could
be considered
as standardized perspective
rather
than
salary
of an occupation.
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