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Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will still remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree? v.1

Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will still remain the most important source of news. v. 1
The widespread utilization of Internet has revolutionized the way people read news, meaning that, they increasingly go online to obtain news. Despite this popularity, it is argued that newspapers will not fade in importance and will still be a common source. I partially agree with this opinion and explain why in the following paragraphs. Today’s digital era has made all sorts of information, including news, accessible online. Everyone now is trying to read online news on the Internet, because this mode of obtaining news is more interactive and richer in content with videos and sounds provided on websites. Another point in favor of e-news would be their accessibility. For example, if one was waiting in a long queue or else in a coffee shop for somebody, simple access to the Internet would provide comforts of reading online news rather than searching for a newspaper. However, newspapers are effortless for people; they can easily read paper-based news without the need to go online and searching for particular websites, such as CNN or BBC. In addition to this, paper-based news pass through editing multiple times and huge publisher companies are held largely accountable for the content they provide in their articles. More specifically, reporters collect up-to-date information and editors check this several times before allowing it to be published. This will, in turn guarantee reliability of such news. Ultimately, stating that newspapers will lose their significance is to ignore the traditional and more conservative members of society who are less computer-literate; this is particularly true for older people. By way of conclusion, although the number of people reading e-news due to their accessibility and interactivity is increasing at a rapid pace, I believe that paper news will still be considered as important. This is because, reliability and personal preferences to read such news will be of equal significance as online news.
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people
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read
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news
, meaning that, they
increasingly
go
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online
to obtain
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news
. Despite this popularity, it
is argued
that newspapers will not fade in importance and will
still
be a common source. I
partially
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agree
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explain
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Today
’s digital era has made all sorts of information, including
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news
, accessible
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online
. Everyone
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now
is trying to
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read
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online
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news
on the Internet,
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because
this mode of obtaining
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news
is more interactive and richer in content with videos and sounds provided on websites. Another point in favor of e-news would be their accessibility.
For example
, if one was waiting in a long queue or else in a coffee shop for somebody, simple access to the Internet would provide comforts of reading
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online
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news
rather
than searching for a newspaper.

However
, newspapers are effortless for
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people
; they can
easily
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read
paper-based
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news
without the need to go
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online
and searching for particular websites, such as CNN or BBC.
In addition
to this, paper-based
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news
pass through editing multiple times and huge publisher
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companies
are held
largely
accountable for the content they provide in their articles. More
specifically
, reporters collect up-to-date information and editors
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check
this several times
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before
allowing it to
be published
. This will, in turn guarantee reliability of such
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news
.
Ultimately
, stating that newspapers will lose their significance is to
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ignore
the traditional and more conservative members of society who are less computer-literate; this is
particularly
true for older
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people
.

By way of conclusion, although the number of
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people
reading e-news due to their accessibility and interactivity is increasing at a rapid pace, I believe that paper
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news
will
still
be considered
as
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important
. This is
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because
, reliability and personal preferences to
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read
such
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news
will be of equal significance as
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online
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news
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will still remain the most important source of news. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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