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All Children should study a foreign language in school, starting in the earliest grades. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.1

All Children should study a foreign language in school, starting in the earliest grades. with this statement? v. 1
I strongly agree that all children should study a foreign language in school, starting from their first day of school, Learning how to communicate with people in other countries is very important in the modern world, and we need to speak different languages in order to do this. Childhood is the best time to learn foreign languages. Modern technology has made the world smaller. By airplane, we can travel to faraway countries in just a few hours. With the Internet, we can communicate instantly with people on the other side of the world. People do business with people in other countries, buy products from other countries, and, unfortunately, have wars with foreign countries. None of these activities are new, but they have become easier to do and more common because of modern technology. Therefore, it is now more important than ever to know how to speak one, two, or more foreign languages. To learn a foreign language well, it is best to start in childhood. Children's brains are made for learning. Children are eager to absorb new information. Children can learn to speak foreign languages as well as their native language. It is difficult to learn a foreign language quite as well if you start studying it at a later age. Therefore, the best way to learn a foreign language is to start studying it during the first years of school. The healthy future of our planet depends on people everywhere being able to communicate well. Teaching children to speak foreign languages from the first years of school will go a long way toward achieving this goal.
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language
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languages
in order to do this. Childhood is the best time to
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learn
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foreign
languages.

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countries
in
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just
a few hours. With the Internet, we can communicate
instantly
with
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people
on the
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other
side of the world.
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do business with
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people
in
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countries
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other
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foreign
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countries
. None of these activities are new,
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of modern technology.
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than ever to know how to
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languages.

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are eager to absorb new information.
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language
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if you
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studying it at a later age.
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, the best way to
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learn
a
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foreign
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language
is to
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start
studying it during the
first
years of school.

The healthy future of our planet depends on
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people
everywhere being able to communicate
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well
. Teaching
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children
to
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speak
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foreign
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languages
from the
first
years of school will go a long way toward achieving this goal.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
48Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay All Children should study a foreign language in school, starting in the earliest grades. with this statement? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
267 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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