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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree? v.10

All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. v. 10
In today’s continuously emerging era, it is highly recommended to reduce usage, by cars, of fossil fuels and should be replaced by electronic ones. I strongly agree with the statement as electric cars produce near-zero air pollution and cost-effective. Since the invention of cars, the air pollution index has always shown an increment over the years. It is the main factor in uplifting global warming effects dramatically in the last few couples of the decade. People, around the world, are facing problems, such as breathing problems, lung issues and in some cases cancer also. More on that, the smoke produced by such cars is causing eye problems as well. The burning sensation is one which, faced with seven among every ten humans. According to a recent study by one of the top most research institutes in the State of America, the smoke produced by cars is as dangerous as inhaling directly by smoking cigarettes. In addition to that, Electricity production is more cost-effective rather than producing fossil fuels with a hefty amount. There are many natural resources available free of cost, like wind energy, solar energy, hydropower energy, by which electricity can be produced with very less infrastructure than needed by refineries. In other words, hybrid or electric cars are more economical and efficient in their performance compared to gas-driven cars. Therefore, it is safe to say that replacing traditional cars with electric ones is a welcoming thought. For example, Electric cars produced by Mitsubishi have a high average and run on energy driven from solar panels. Thus, to conclude, Electric cars have a positive effect on the globe with respect to the environment and finance to bring a good attitude within society. I strongly believe there is no loss to use electric cars.
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highly
recommended to
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reduce
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cars
, of fossil fuels and should
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ones
. I
strongly
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agree
with the statement as
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electric
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cars
produce near-zero air pollution and cost-effective.

Since the invention of
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cars
, the air pollution index has always shown an increment over the years. It is the main factor in uplifting global warming effects
dramatically
in the last few couples of the decade.
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People
, around the world, are facing problems, such as breathing problems, lung issues and in
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some
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cancer
also
. More on that, the smoke
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produced
by such
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cars
is causing eye problems
as well
. The burning sensation is one which, faced with seven among every ten humans. According to a recent study by one of the top most research institutes in the State of America, the smoke
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produced
by
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cars
is as
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dangerous
as inhaling
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by smoking cigarettes.

In addition
to that, Electricity production is more cost-effective
rather
than producing fossil fuels with a hefty amount. There are
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many
natural resources available free of cost, like wind
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energy
, solar
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energy
, hydropower
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energy
, by which electricity can be
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produced
with
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very
less infrastructure than needed by refineries.
In other words
, hybrid or
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electric
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cars
are more economical and efficient in their performance compared to gas-driven
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cars
.
Therefore
, it is safe to say that replacing traditional
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cars
with
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electric
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ones
is a welcoming
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thought
.
For example
,
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Electric
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cars
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produced
by Mitsubishi have a high average and run on
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energy
driven from solar panels.

Thus
,
to conclude
,
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Electric
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cars
have a
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positive
effect on the globe with respect to the environment and finance to bring a
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good
attitude within society. I
strongly
believe there is no loss to
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use
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electric
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cars
.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes
Language comes first. It’s not that language grows out of consciousness, if you haven’t got language, you can’t be conscious.
Alan Moore

IELTS essay All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. v. 10

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
294 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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