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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems. v.28

Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems. v. 28
In the recent times, people in many parts of the world are migrating from rural areas to cities for numerous reasons. This has not only resulted in excess population, but also caused several problems in many metropolitan cities. This essay will discuss the main cause of this problem as the pollution and suggests the suitable solution to this is to use electric vehicles and plant more trees. One of the major consequences of overpopulation in urban areas is, increased pollution levels. This is due to the significant increase of vehicles on the roads which are emitting high polluted air. Moreover, the manufacturing industries located nearby the cities had worsened the situation by emitting dangerous gases. For instance, a recent survey shows that, the air quality levels in the New York are at all time alarming levels due to pollution from vehicles. As a result, many residents are suffering with problems associated with lack of fresh air. The best way to address this problem is to plant a number of trees which will reduce the carbon dioxide levels in the air. Rather than cutting down the trees while constructing huge skyscrapers, they should be built in an Eco friendly manner. Furthermore, people should start using electric vehicles rather than gas vehicles which are environmentally friendly and will greatly bring down pollution levels. For example, the Norway government banned gas cars so people started using electric cars which have zero emissions. To sum up, the over population in cities has caused severe problems like increased pollution levels, which can be controlled with the help of both governments and the public. Planting more trees and using electric vehicles will help to improve air quality levels.
In the recent times,
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people
in
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many
parts of the world are migrating from rural areas to
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cities
for numerous reasons. This has not
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only
resulted in excess population,
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but
also
caused several
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problems
in
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many
metropolitan
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cities
. This essay will discuss the main cause of this
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problem
as the
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pollution
and suggests the suitable solution to this is to
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use
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electric
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vehicles
and plant more trees.

One of the major consequences of overpopulation in urban areas is, increased
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pollution
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levels
. This is due to the significant increase of
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vehicles
on the roads which are emitting high polluted
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air
.
Moreover
, the manufacturing industries located nearby the
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cities
had worsened the situation by emitting
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dangerous
gases.
For instance
, a recent survey
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shows
that, the
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air
quality
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levels
in the New York are at all time alarming
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levels
due to
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pollution
from
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vehicles
.
As a result
,
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many
residents are suffering with
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problems
associated with lack of fresh air.

The best way to address this
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problem
is to plant a number of trees which will
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reduce
the carbon dioxide
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levels
in the
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air
.
Rather
than cutting down the trees while constructing huge skyscrapers, they should
be built
in an Eco friendly manner.
Furthermore
,
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people
should
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start
using
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electric
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vehicles
rather
than gas
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vehicles
which are
environmentally
friendly and will
greatly
bring down
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pollution
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levels
.
For example
, the Norway
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government
banned gas cars
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so
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people
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started
using
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electric
cars which have zero emissions.

To sum up, the over population in
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cities
has caused severe
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problems
like increased
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pollution
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levels
, which can
be controlled
with the
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help
of both
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governments
and the public. Planting more trees and using
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electric
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vehicles
will
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help
to
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improve
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air
quality
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levels
.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems. v. 28

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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