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Air travel should be restricted because of pollution and uses up the world's fuel. Do you agree or disagree? v.3

Air travel should be restricted because of pollution and uses up the world's fuel. v. 3
TECHNOLOGY ADVANCEMENT HAS MADE EASY TOUR FACILITIES IN THE MEANS OF PLANE, TRAIN AND BUS. AND, THUS, GLOBAL WARMING EFFECT HAS BEEN INCREASING WITH INCREASED NUMBER OF VEHICLES. CERTAIN PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT AIR-COMMUTATION SHOULD HAVE SOME LIMITATIONS UPON TRAVELING FROM ONE PLACE TO ANOTHER. THIS ESSAY WILL PARTIALLY CONCUR WITH THE ABOVE NOTION AND DISCUSS ABOUT WHY IT SHOULD HAVE CERTAIN RESTICTIONS AND WHAT WOULD BE THE IMPACT OF RESTRICTION ON BUSINESSES DEVELOPING NATIONS. ON THE ONE HAND, AIR-COMMUTATION RESTRICTION S LOWERS THE AMOUNT OF HAZARDOUS GAES IN THE AIR THROUGH FLIGHTS. AS A RESULT, PEOPLE WOULD NOT HAVE MORE HEALTH PROBLEMS AS RESPIRATORY TRAC IS THE MAIN PART OF THE BODY TO INHALE THE OXYGEN WHICH IS ESSENTIAL FOR LIVING. AND, AT LAST, THIS REDUCTION IN DANGEROUS GASES CAUSE DECLINE IN THE GLOBAL WARMING EFFECT TO SOME EXTENT. FOR EXAMPLE, WEATHER DEPARTMENT OF THE UK REPORT REVEALED THAT 70% 0F AIR POLLUTION IS DUE TO THE RUNNING PLANES IN THE SKY. IF, LESS NUMBER OF FLIGHT RUNS, THERE WOULD BE DECREASED AMOUNT OF POLLUTION WHICH IS MAIN TRIGOR TO HAVE GLOBAL WARMING. HENCE, IT IS ADVANTAGEOUS TO CUT TH NUMBER OF FLIGHT RUNNING IN THE AIR. ON THE OTHER HAND, DEVELOPING COUNTRIES ECONOMY WILL BE IN EFFECT BECAUSE, MOST OF THE BUSINESSES RUN IN THE DEVELOPING NATIONS BASED ON EFFORTLESS AND SHORT DURATION OF AIR TRAVEL. IF THE PLANES ARE REFRAIN FROM DEPARTING FREQUENTLY, INTERNATIONAL BUSINESSES WOULD DROP DOWN SUDDENDLYTO MAJOR EXTENT AND THIS LEADS TO DECREAE IN THE HOME COUNTRY'S ECONOMY. FOR INSTANCE, INTERNATION ENTREPREUNERS SURVEY DEPICTED THAT, 80% OF THE BUSINESSES ARE SUCCESSFUL AND EARN HIGH PROFITS AND SUPPORT THE NATIONS TO IMPROVE THE ECONOMICAL STATUS OF THE NATION. IN CONCLUSION, AIR TRAVEL INDEED HELP PEOPLE TO GO TO ANOTHER PLACE BUT, ONE SHOULD NEVER NEGOTIATE THE CONSEQUENCES OF TRAVEL THROUGH FLIGHTS. HOWEVER, IF IT IS POSSIBLE TO FIND AN ALTERNATIVES OF PLANES THEN, THE CONS OF THE AIR COMMUTATION CAN BE MINIMIZE.
TECHNOLOGY ADVANCEMENT HAS MADE EASY TOUR FACILITIES IN THE MEANS OF
PLANE
, TRAIN AND BUS. AND,
THUS
, GLOBAL WARMING EFFECT HAS BEEN INCREASING WITH INCREASED NUMBER OF VEHICLES. CERTAIN
PEOPLE
BELIEVE THAT AIR-COMMUTATION SHOULD HAVE
SOME
LIMITATIONS UPON TRAVELING FROM ONE PLACE TO ANOTHER. THIS ESSAY WILL
PARTIALLY
CONCUR WITH THE ABOVE NOTION AND
DISCUSS ABOUT WHY
IT SHOULD HAVE CERTAIN
RESTICTIONS
AND WHAT WOULD BE THE IMPACT OF RESTRICTION ON
BUSINESSES
DEVELOPING NATIONS.

ON THE ONE HAND, AIR-COMMUTATION RESTRICTION S LOWERS THE AMOUNT OF HAZARDOUS
GAES
IN THE
AIR
THROUGH
FLIGHTS
.
AS A RESULT
,
PEOPLE
WOULD NOT HAVE MORE HEALTH PROBLEMS AS RESPIRATORY
TRAC
IS THE MAIN PART OF THE BODY TO INHALE THE OXYGEN WHICH IS ESSENTIAL FOR LIVING. AND, AT LAST, THIS REDUCTION IN
DANGEROUS
GASES CAUSE DECLINE IN THE GLOBAL WARMING EFFECT TO
SOME
EXTENT.
FOR EXAMPLE
,

WEATHER DEPARTMENT OF THE UK REPORT REVEALED THAT 70% 0F
AIR
POLLUTION IS DUE TO THE RUNNING
PLANES
IN THE SKY. IF, LESS NUMBER OF
FLIGHT
RUNS, THERE WOULD
BE DECREASED
AMOUNT OF POLLUTION WHICH IS MAIN
TRIGOR
TO HAVE GLOBAL WARMING.
HENCE
, IT IS ADVANTAGEOUS TO
CUT
TH NUMBER OF
FLIGHT
RUNNING IN THE AIR.

ON THE OTHER HAND
,
DEVELOPING COUNTRIES
ECONOMY WILL BE IN EFFECT
BECAUSE
, MOST OF THE
BUSINESSES
RUN IN THE DEVELOPING NATIONS BASED ON EFFORTLESS AND SHORT DURATION OF
AIR
TRAVEL. IF THE
PLANES
ARE REFRAIN FROM DEPARTING
FREQUENTLY
, INTERNATIONAL
BUSINESSES
WOULD
DROP DOWN
SUDDENDLYTO
MAJOR EXTENT AND THIS LEADS TO
DECREAE
IN THE HOME COUNTRY'S ECONOMY.
FOR INSTANCE
, INTERNATION
ENTREPREUNERS
SURVEY DEPICTED THAT, 80% OF THE
BUSINESSES
ARE SUCCESSFUL AND EARN HIGH PROFITS AND SUPPORT THE NATIONS TO
IMPROVE
THE
ECONOMICAL
STATUS OF THE NATION.

IN CONCLUSION
,
AIR
TRAVEL
INDEED
HELP
PEOPLE
TO GO TO ANOTHER PLACE
BUT
, ONE SHOULD NEVER NEGOTIATE THE CONSEQUENCES OF TRAVEL THROUGH
FLIGHTS
.
HOWEVER
, IF IT IS POSSIBLE TO FIND AN ALTERNATIVES OF
PLANES
THEN, THE CONS OF THE
AIR
COMMUTATION CAN BE
MINIMIZE
.
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IELTS essay Air travel should be restricted because of pollution and uses up the world's fuel. v. 3

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
326 words
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