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Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world’s fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.3

Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world’s fuel resources. v. 3
IT IS TRUE THAT PEOPLE ARE TRAVELING BY FLIGHT HAS BECOME MORE FREQUENT THAN EVER BEFORE. THIS HAS CAUSED A ENORMOUS AMOUNT OF AIR POLLUTION IN THE AIR. HENCE, CERTAIN FOLKS BELIEVE THAT IT SHOULD BE RESTRICTED TO DECLINE THE ADVERSE EFFECT. THIS ESSAY WILL 100% CONCURE WITH THE ABOVE NOTION AS IT HAS FORMED MYRID OF MENCE ON THE EARTH BY CONSUMING EARTH FUEL AND SECONDLY, DISCUSSE THE MAJOR REASON BEHIND REFRAINING THE AIR PLANE USAGE. FIRSTLY, THE PRIME GROUND OF LESS PLANE USES REDUCE THE AMOUNT OF FUEL USAGE TOO THAT IS REQUIRE FOR THE SURVIVAL OF THE HUMAN ON EARTH. THIS ACTION MAY LEAD TO AVAIL THE MORE LAND FOR THE PEOPLE'S SHELTERS WHO ARE HOMELESS. CONSEQUENTLY, THE REGIME OF THE NATION ARE ABLE TO PROVIDE A BETTER FUNDAMENTAL LIVING MATERIAL TO THE IMPOVERISHED CITIZENS. FOR EXAMPLE, ACCORDING TO THE WORLD SURVEY OF THE LAND MAINTANENCE DEPARTMENT, THE CHINA HAS THE LOWEST PROBLEM WITH THE FUEL AS THEY HAVE RESTRICTED THE AIRWAY USE. ANOTHER REASON IS THAT IT WOULD DEMINISHES THE ENVIRONMENTAL ISSUE TO THE MAJOR EXTENT. WHEN THERE IS LESS NUMBER OF AIR PLANE RUNS IN THE AIR, IT EXHAUST THE DECREASE AMOUNT OF GASES IN THE ATMOSPHERE. THIS LEADS TO DECINE THE POLLUTION. AS PER THE UK ENVIRONMENTAL STUDY, THERE HAS BEEN 70% OF THE DROP NOTICED IN THE JAPAN BECAUSE OF THE LESS FLIGHT SURVICES. HOWEVER, THIS FACILTY HAVE SURGERD THE NUMBER OF BUSINESS AND MADE EASY AND SHORT TRAVELLING FREQUENCY. IN CONCLUSION, AIR POLLUTION INDEED DECREASED BY INHIBITING THE AIR WAYS USAGE. THIS WOULD ONLY BE POSSIBLE WHEN WHOLE WORLD HAS SAME CONCERN OF THEIR SURROUNDINGS. THUS, TO MAKE THIS HAPPEN, INDIVIDUAL AND THE REGIME SHOULD WORK TOGETHER AS A TEAM.
IT IS TRUE THAT
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PEOPLE
ARE TRAVELING BY FLIGHT HAS BECOME MORE FREQUENT THAN EVER
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BEFORE
. THIS HAS CAUSED A ENORMOUS AMOUNT OF
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AIR
POLLUTION IN THE
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AIR
.
HENCE
, CERTAIN FOLKS BELIEVE THAT IT SHOULD
BE RESTRICTED
TO DECLINE THE ADVERSE EFFECT. THIS ESSAY WILL 100%
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CONCURE
WITH THE ABOVE NOTION AS IT HAS FORMED
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MYRID
OF
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MENCE
ON THE EARTH BY CONSUMING EARTH FUEL AND
SECONDLY
,
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DISCUSSE
THE MAJOR REASON BEHIND REFRAINING THE
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AIR
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PLANE
USAGE.

FIRSTLY
, THE PRIME GROUND OF LESS
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PLANE
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USES
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REDUCE
THE AMOUNT OF FUEL USAGE TOO
THAT IS
REQUIRE FOR THE SURVIVAL OF THE HUMAN ON EARTH. THIS ACTION MAY LEAD TO AVAIL THE MORE LAND FOR THE
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PEOPLE
'S SHELTERS WHO ARE HOMELESS.
CONSEQUENTLY
, THE REGIME OF THE NATION ARE ABLE TO PROVIDE A BETTER FUNDAMENTAL LIVING MATERIAL TO THE IMPOVERISHED CITIZENS.
FOR EXAMPLE
, ACCORDING TO THE WORLD SURVEY OF THE LAND
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MAINTANENCE
DEPARTMENT, THE CHINA HAS THE LOWEST PROBLEM WITH THE FUEL AS THEY HAVE RESTRICTED THE AIRWAY
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USE
.

ANOTHER REASON IS THAT IT WOULD
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DEMINISHES
THE ENVIRONMENTAL ISSUE TO THE MAJOR EXTENT. WHEN THERE IS LESS NUMBER OF
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AIR
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PLANE
RUNS IN THE
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AIR
, IT EXHAUST THE DECREASE AMOUNT OF GASES IN THE ATMOSPHERE. THIS LEADS TO
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DECINE
THE POLLUTION. AS PER THE UK ENVIRONMENTAL STUDY, THERE HAS BEEN 70% OF THE DROP NOTICED IN THE JAPAN
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BECAUSE
OF THE LESS FLIGHT
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SURVICES
.
HOWEVER
, THIS
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FACILTY
HAVE
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SURGERD
THE NUMBER OF BUSINESS AND MADE EASY AND SHORT TRAVELLING FREQUENCY.

IN CONCLUSION
,
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AIR
POLLUTION
INDEED
DECREASED BY INHIBITING THE
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AIR
WAYS USAGE. THIS WOULD
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ONLY
BE POSSIBLE WHEN WHOLE WORLD HAS SAME CONCERN OF THEIR SURROUNDINGS.
THUS
, TO
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MAKE
THIS HAPPEN, INDIVIDUAL AND THE REGIME SHOULD WORK TOGETHER AS A TEAM.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world’s fuel resources. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
288 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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