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Agree or Disagree you the with the Do at The following Statement? Always Telling at The Truth IS MOST at The Relationship Important Consideration in the BETWEEN the any people. The Use specific examples and Reasons to Support your answer. v.4

Agree or Disagree you the with the Do at The following Statement? Always Telling at The Truth IS MOST at The Relationship Important Consideration in the BETWEEN the any people. The Use specific examples and Reasons to Support your answer. v. 4
Some people think that telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Others think that hiding some truths can be more beneficial in the relationship. The issue is a controversial one, but in my opinion, a closer examination reveals that telling the truth is better than hiding it for several reasons. In this essay I will explain my position providing examples to support my claims. One reason is telling the truth can create trust between people, and trust can make the relationship stronger. The more information people know about other, the more trust they have. For example, when I first attend the first year of my university, I have no friend, because I didn' t trust anyone enough to tell my story to. Anyway, I learnt that I have to make friends in order to learn happily. I started to tell my story to others. Moreover, I chose telling only the true story about myself to show my sincere. Finally, I gradually connected with others and had many friends. Clearly, telling the truth creates more healthy relationship. Another reason is that people tend to have less stress telling the truth. Having secrets to hide from other can cause the anxiety, because he or she need to be aware of others all the time. For example, last year my friend asked me to help her planning her wedding, but I was very busy with my business. At first, I didn' t tell her that I couldn' t help because I afraid that she might mad at me. Later, I felt worried and upset, so I told my friend the truth about my business and refused to help her. Surprisingly, my friend was happy that I tell her the truth so that she can ask others to do this job instead of me. Clearly, sincerely admit the truth to others is better than keep it and make it annoy yourself. In summary, while there are arguments to be made for both sides, it is clear that there are greater advantages of telling the truth because of the above mentioned reasons. Certainly, the truth is the most important thing in any relationship between people.
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in my opinion, a closer examination reveals that
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is better than hiding it for several
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my position providing examples to support my claims.

One
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can create
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,
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creates more healthy relationship.

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tend to have less
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. Having secrets to
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can cause the anxiety,
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about my business and refused to
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, my
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was happy that I
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that she can ask others to do this job
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to others is better than
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is the most
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IELTS essay Agree or Disagree you the with the Do at The following Statement? Always Telling at The Truth IS MOST at The Relationship Important Consideration in the BETWEEN the any people. The Use specific examples and Reasons to Support your answer. v. 4

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
366 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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