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advantage and disadvantage of the use of organic foods v.1

advantage and disadvantage of the use of organic foods v. 1
Organic foods are an irreplaceable part of our daily life. It is evident that the utilize of organic food is highly beneficial in terms of numerous aspects. However, it is undeniable that organic foods have several disadvantages. On the one hand, organic foods do not contain any preservatives and chemical substances, they are fresher and healthier. Natural foods are said to have certain nutrients which have a significant role in the promotion of a healthy organism. It enables the use of organic foods more highly rated. Another point is that organic foods are more appropriate for children and people who have allergic diseases, because it has no oppositional affects. In addition, they produce more organic pigments and therefore they have flavourful taste. On the other hand, organic foods have notable disadvantages. The major negative side is that, they do not stay fresher for a long time, since natural products do not involve any preservatives. Therefore they tend to spoil much quicker, their storage life is shorter in comparison to that involve chemical substances in it. Moreover, the growing up of natural foods takes a long time, because farmers do not engage any artificial methods to grow organic foods, as a result, it influences the cost of product great. It is obvious that, expensive products are not an optional choice for consumers. On balance, it is certain that organic foods have definite disadvantages. However, the consume of natural foods has significant benefits. Despite the cons of natural foods are numerous, they are overweight by pros of it.
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have several disadvantages.

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do not contain any preservatives and chemical substances, they are fresher and healthier.
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are said
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pigments and
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have notable disadvantages. The major
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,
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On balance, it is certain that
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has significant benefits. Despite the cons of
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are numerous, they are overweight by pros of it.
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28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay advantage and disadvantage of the use of organic foods v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
256 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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