The often debated topic nowadays is whether the people should live an independent life or the dependency on other. In my opinion, people should have the capability to lead a life in both the way such that to have a successful life, which I will discuss in the following paragraph.
Firstly, the people should be able to manage any kind of situation with their own knowledge and capability without getting frightened or depressed. Every individual must have a will power to fight against a problem without seeking a help for others. When one develops such ability, he can face any challenges of his life; for example, when people are out from their hometown. We can’t seek help from our parents all time. Parents cannot guide in every step of your life so it’s important to make your own way in handling a situation.
On the other side, it’s not good to be an independent throughout the life. When you are introduced into a company you need to depend on others to get guidelines and support which make your work successful. For example, when you are given a task of developing software you need to work as a team to meet all necessity and finish up by the given schedule. Not only in a working area but also when you are old enough you are unable to do work of your own and it’s necessary to depend on others.
As per my view leading a dependent and independent life depends on the situation. Hence it would be better to introduce yourself to both.
The
often
debated topic nowadays is whether the
people
should
live
an independent
life
or the dependency on
other
. In my opinion,
people
should have the capability to lead a
life
in both the way such that to have a successful
life
, which I will discuss in the following paragraph.
Firstly
, the
people
should be able to manage any kind of situation with their
own
knowledge and capability without getting frightened or depressed. Every individual
must
have a will power to fight against a problem without seeking a
help
for others. When one develops such ability, he can face any challenges of his
life
;
for example
, when
people
are out from their hometown.
We can’t seek
help
from our parents all time. Parents cannot guide in every step of your
life
so
it’s
important
to
make
your
own
way in handling a situation.
On the
other
side, it’s not
good
to be an independent throughout the
life
. When you
are introduced
into a
company
you need to depend on others to
get
guidelines and support which
make
your work successful.
For example
, when you are
given
a task of developing software you need to work as a team to
meet
all necessity and finish up by the
given
schedule. Not
only
in a working area
but
also
when you are
old
enough
you are unable to do work of your
own
and it’s necessary to depend on others.
As per my view leading a dependent and independent
life
depends on the situation.
Hence
it would be better to introduce yourself to both.
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