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A report written in the 1960s made the following claim; ‘machine translation is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans. ’ 2
It is believed that machines and advanced technologies, such as robots or translator machines, have been helping humans in various aspects of life. It is not too hard to find out what they can do or what they are used for. Also, no one can predict what will happen in the future. There are some evidences which totally say the fact that in near future robots and machines take out our jobs and duties from our hand. It is inevitable that the translator machines make the translation process convenient. Many people, especially the ones who have a job related to foreign people or the ones who are studying a foreign language at universities, use dictionaries to get the new words meaning. Many dictionary tools or books are accessible but these people usually tend to use a special program or machine for translation because these tools make themselves updated with the latest information and interpreting methods everyday which can improve the translation’s quality. This fact must be taken into account that when human beings use a language to communicate or talk to others, their thoughts and particularly their emotions always affect their message. It is difficult for machines to understand the exact message of what they have heard. Robots or machines do not have any realizations about emotions or sentiments. In addition, the theme of a speaking or a writing can change the meaning of words that is not obvious in advance and it is unknown to the machines, such as poetries. All in all, we cannot overlook the crucial role of machines in our today’s life. And also with the improving of artificial intelligence, it is not far beyond our thoughts that one day a machine will understand our exact feelings and emotions. Finally, I agree with the statement that a translator machine can take an independent place to translate human words accurately.
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and advanced technologies, such as robots or translator
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, have been helping humans in various aspects of life. It is not too
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hard
to find out what they can do or what they are
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used
for.
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some
evidences which
totally
say the fact that in near future robots and
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machines
take out our jobs and duties from our hand.

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machines
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make
the translation process convenient.
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people
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ones
who have a job related to foreign
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people
or the
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ones
who are studying a foreign language at universities,
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use
dictionaries to
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get
the new words meaning.
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Many
dictionary tools or books are accessible
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these
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people
usually
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use
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machine
for translation
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because
these tools
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make
themselves updated with the latest information and interpreting methods
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which can
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improve
the translation’s quality.

This fact
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must
be taken
into account that when human beings
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
a language to communicate or talk to others, their thoughts and
particularly
their emotions always affect their message. It is difficult for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
machines
to understand the exact message of what they have heard. Robots or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
machines
do not have any realizations about emotions or sentiments.
In addition
, the theme of a speaking or a writing can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the meaning of words
that is
not obvious in advance and it is unknown to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
machines
, such as
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poetries
.

All in all, we cannot overlook the crucial role of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
machines
in our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
’s life. And
also
with the improving of artificial intelligence, it is not far beyond our thoughts that one day a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
machine
will understand our exact feelings and emotions.
Finally
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with the statement that a translator
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machine
can take an independent place to translate human words
accurately
.
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13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay A report written in the 1960s made the following claim; ‘machine translation is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans. ’ 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
313 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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