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A report written in the 1960s made the following claim; ‘machine translation is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans. ’ 1
Scientific studies have now emerged from exploring things on earth to a person walking on the moon. While conducting this space-oriented researches which are way too expensive and are funded by the government. Although these studies have a considerable amount of benefits, some still feel that this money can be utilized in other important activities. This essay will discuss both the contradictory views of people, whether funding these space projects are worthy enough or not. On one hand, ample amount of people thinks that it’s important to undergo studies related to space exploration. They strongly believe that these kind of research works can help them to understand the outer world better and in addition the results obtained from it can be a useful resource for future generations. To illustrate it better, India’s new project on identifying the existence of life on Mars had paved path for many other researches. Hence, these studies can play a major part in upcoming years. On the other hand, some still oppose these views and suggest that the amount spent for these projects can be rather used in other important things. The reason behind this opinion is because they feel there are lots more problems which need to be addressed in our surrounding instead of looking for things which aren’t in our control. For instance, Sri Lanka has stopped funding its space projects and started investing in improving its environmental activities which now is considered as an environmentally friendly country. Therefore, by financing these activities can solve various problems and improve standard of living. To sum up, space exploration in a way has opened barriers for many more opportunities with respect to future, but some still feel its not worth spending and also suggest to use it for other major issues that we are currently facing. To conclude, in my opinion, it's worth spending on space projects as it improves our knowledge on the outer world and in addition it can be more valuable in future when its hard to live on earth.
Scientific
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studies
have
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now
emerged from exploring things on earth to a person walking on the moon. While conducting this space-oriented researches which are way too expensive and
are funded
by the
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government
. Although these
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studies
have a considerable amount of benefits,
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some
still
feel that this money can
be utilized
in
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other
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important
activities. This essay will discuss both the contradictory views of
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people
, whether funding these
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space
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projects
are worthy
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enough
or not.

On one hand, ample amount of
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people
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thinks
that it’s
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important
to undergo
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studies
related to
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space
exploration. They
strongly
believe that
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these kind
of research works can
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help
them to understand the outer world better and
in addition
the results obtained from it can be a useful resource for future generations. To illustrate it better, India’s new
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project
on identifying the existence of life on Mars had paved path for
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many
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other
researches.
Hence
, these
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studies
can play a major part in upcoming years.

On the
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other
hand,
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some
still
oppose these views and suggest that the amount spent for these
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projects
can be
rather
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used
in
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other
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important
things. The reason behind this opinion is
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because
they feel there are lots more problems which need to
be addressed
in our surrounding
instead
of looking for things which aren’t in our control.
For instance
, Sri Lanka has
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stopped
funding its
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space
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projects
and
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started
investing in improving its environmental activities which
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now
is considered
as an
environmentally
friendly country.
Therefore
, by financing these activities can solve various problems and
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improve
standard of living.

To sum up,
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space
exploration in a way has opened barriers for
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many
more opportunities with respect to future,
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but
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some
still
feel its not worth spending and
also
suggest to
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use
it for
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other
major issues that we are
currently
facing.
To conclude
, in my opinion, it's worth spending on
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space
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projects
as it
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improves
our knowledge on the outer world and
in addition
it can be more valuable in future when
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its
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hard
to
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live
on earth.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay A report written in the 1960s made the following claim; ‘machine translation is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans. ’ 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
338 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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