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A recent study reveals that people especially young people are reading far less literature, novels, plays, and poems, than they used to. This is troubling because the trend has unfortunate effects for the reading public, for culture in general, and for the v.2

A recent study reveals that people especially young people are reading far less literature, novels, plays, and poems, than they used to. This is troubling because the trend has unfortunate effects for the reading public, for culture in general, and for the v. 2
The reading excerpt states that people are reading far less literature, novels, plays, and poem, this is troubling because the trend has unfortunate effects for the reading public, for culture in general and for the future of literature itself. The author provides three reasons for support. However, the lecture' s audio claims that there are a lot of problems with the author theories and she refutes each of them. First, the article avers that the decline of literature will affect the intellectual stimulation that literature dose as it encourages imagination. In contrast, the professor opposes this idea by stating that people may read books other than the literature books and also will improve their intellectual stimulation such as history or political science books which also enhance the imaginations. Consequently, this theory cannot support the author' s belief. Second, the passage posits that diverting time previously spent in literature to trivial forms of entertainment has lowered the level of culture in general. On the other hand, the speaker argues this point by saying that do not read literature and books in general, this is not mean the literature is in decline because may enrich their mind with non-written sources such as movies or music, for example, listening to a brilliant sound, moreover, the culture changes and people may like to listen to speech directly. So, this point of view cannot champion the author' s statement. Third, the excerpt mentions that this fact bound to lead publishers to invest less in literature and so support fewer serious writers. In contrary, the lecturer counteracts this theory and explains that it is maybe not the audience fault, but, the writer may write in a difficult way that is arduous for people to read. Thus, this outlook contradicts what the professor discussed.
The reading excerpt states that
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people
are reading far less
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literature
, novels, plays, and poem, this is troubling
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because
the trend has unfortunate effects for the reading public, for culture
in general
and for the future of
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literature
itself. The
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author
provides three reasons for support.
However
, the
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lecture&
#039; s audio claims that there are
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a lot of
problems with the
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author
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theories and
she refutes each of them.

First
, the article avers that the decline of
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literature
will affect the intellectual stimulation that
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literature
dose as it encourages imagination.
In contrast
, the professor opposes this
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idea
by stating that
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people
may read
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books
other than the
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literature
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books
and
also
will
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improve
their intellectual stimulation such as history or political science
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books
which
also
enhance the imaginations.
Consequently
, this theory cannot support the
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author&
#039; s belief.

Second, the passage posits that diverting time previously spent in
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literature
to trivial forms of entertainment has lowered the level of culture
in general
.
On the other hand
, the speaker argues this point by saying that do not read
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literature
and
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books
in general
, this is not mean the
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literature
is in decline
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because
may enrich their mind with non-written sources such as movies or music,
for example
, listening to a brilliant sound,
moreover
, the culture
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changes
and
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people
may like to listen to speech
directly
.
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So
, this point of view cannot champion the
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author&
#039; s statement.

Third, the excerpt mentions that this fact bound to lead publishers to invest less in
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literature
and
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so
support fewer serious writers. In contrary, the lecturer counteracts this theory and
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explains
that it is maybe not the audience fault,
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but
, the writer may write
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in a difficult way
that is
arduous for
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people
to read.
Thus
, this outlook contradicts what the professor discussed.
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21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay A recent study reveals that people especially young people are reading far less literature, novels, plays, and poems, than they used to. This is troubling because the trend has unfortunate effects for the reading public, for culture in general, and for the v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
297 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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