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A poor infrastructure hinders under-developed countries from progressing and modernizing. Some people think that this should be the first problem tackled by foreign aid. v.1

A poor infrastructure hinders under-developed countries from progressing and modernizing. Some people think that this should be the first problem tackled by foreign aid. v. 1
E-books are gaining popularity which has resulted in the lesser usage of the conventional paper books. While some people consider it as a good step ahead, others are still a huge supporter of the basic ways of reading. E-books have the advantages of easy accessibility and environment friendly, but there still exists some drawbacks. Firstly, the e-books provides a big benefit of availability. Every book is easily available across different websites, which saves the person from a lot of work done to get a book. Secondly, there is a vast library of books online, which also provides with reviews, making it easy for the person to select. Thirdly, they are friendly to the environment, which means, no trees are cut to make the necessary paper. Also, it is conveniently recyclable. On the other hand, there are some issues with these newer ways of reading. One of which is unemployment. With the advent in this new trend, industries would leave the conventional book making and a lot of people could lose their jobs. For instance, book shops would close as less number of customers would prefer the old ways. Another drawback is that, people are used to actual books and it provides them with a sense of satisfaction. With the lesser trend of these books and eventual non availability would result in loss of the habit of reading in these people. In conclusion, while e-books are good to nature and are abundantly available, it can also lead to loss of manual jobs.
E-books are gaining popularity which has resulted in the lesser usage of the conventional paper
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books
. While
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some
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people
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but
there
still
exists
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some
drawbacks.

Firstly
, the e-books provides a
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big
benefit of availability. Every
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book
is
easily
available across
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different
websites, which saves the person from
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a lot of
work done to
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get
a
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book
.
Secondly
, there is a vast library of
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books
online, which
also
provides with reviews, making it easy for the person to select.
Thirdly
, they are friendly to the environment, which means, no trees are
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cut
to
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make
the necessary paper.
Also
, it is
conveniently
recyclable.

On the other hand
, there are
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some
issues with these newer ways of reading. One of which is unemployment. With the advent in this new trend, industries would
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leave
the conventional
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book
making and
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a lot of
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people
could lose their jobs.
For instance
,
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book
shops would close as less number of customers would prefer the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
ways. Another drawback is that,
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people
are
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used
to actual
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books
and it provides them with a sense of satisfaction. With the lesser trend of these
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books
and eventual
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non availability
would result in loss of the habit of reading in these
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people
.

In conclusion
, while e-books are
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good
to nature and are
abundantly
available, it can
also
lead to loss of manual jobs.
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IELTS essay A poor infrastructure hinders under-developed countries from progressing and modernizing. Some people think that this should be the first problem tackled by foreign aid. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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