Money and status are highly valued in today’s society and have changed our values to some extent. However, in everyday life I don’t believe a person’s worth is judged that differently to in the past.
It is apparent that most celebrities today are admired or envied solely for their material wealth or position in various social hierarchies. Many of these people are known to turn their backs on friends, cheat on their spouses or spend their evenings over-indulging in alcohol and/or drugs. Things like owning a mansion, driving an expensive car and getting into A-list parties are exalted above old-fashioned values. Ultimately, though, it is the many readers of gossip magazines and celebrity blogs who reinforce these ideas.
Nevertheless, I do believe that in their day-to-day lives most people still believe in values such as honour, kindness and trust. In some way most of us want to form loving families, raise our children to be good citizens, stand up for the downtrodden and protect our communities from harm. We still form friendships, romances and business partnerships based on old-fashioned criteria. When our trust is abused or we are unfairly treated, we see that as a major violation of our relationship and we judge the wrongdoer accordingly.
In conclusion, while status and possessions as a measure of a person’s worth have become more popular, the behaviour of most ordinary people shows that the old values are still strong. It is unlikely that honour, kindness, and trust will ever be replaced while parents continue to teach their children to respect them. 
Money and status are  
highly
 valued in  
today
’s society and have  
changed
 our values to  
some
 extent.  
However
, in everyday life I don’t believe a person’s worth  
is judged
 that  
differently
 to in the past.
It is apparent that most celebrities  
today
  are admired
 or envied  
solely
 for their material wealth or position in various social hierarchies.  
Many
 of these  
people
  are known
 to turn their backs on friends, cheat on their spouses or spend their evenings over-indulging in alcohol and/or drugs. Things like owning a mansion, driving an expensive car and getting into A-list parties  
are exalted
 above  
old
-fashioned values.  
Ultimately
, though, it is the  
many
 readers of gossip magazines and celebrity blogs who reinforce these  
ideas
. 
Nevertheless
, I do believe that in their day-to-day  
lives
 most  
people
  still
 believe in values such as  
honour
, kindness and trust. In  
some
 way most of us want to form loving families, raise our children to be  
good
 citizens, stand up for the downtrodden and protect our communities from harm. We  
still
 form friendships, romances and business partnerships based on  
old
-fashioned criteria. When our trust is  
abused or
 we are  
unfairly
 treated, we  
see
 that as a major violation of our  
relationship and
 we judge the wrongdoer  
accordingly
. 
In conclusion
, while status and possessions as a measure of a person’s worth have become more popular, the  
behaviour
 of most ordinary  
people
  shows
 that the  
old
 values are  
still
 strong. It is unlikely that  
honour
, kindness, and trust will ever  
be replaced
 while parents continue to teach their children to respect them. 
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7.5Mistakes