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Some people say that Ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree. v.5

It is irrefutable that modern technology can replace newspapers and magazines in the near future. A number of people has started using E-books or E-news on the contrary, for them a satisfactory day is when they receive newspaper in the early morning and read it with a cup of tea or coffee. However, I completely disagree with the given statement and reasons are discussed below. One of the major reasons is getting a clear picture about the event or news. Majority believe that the articles printed in a sheet of paper is more relevant and in-depth than what we see in internet. Moreover, when the same news is read in a newspaper it seems to have covered everything related to the incident. For instance, recently a plane crash happened in an airport and each update provided in digital platform was false. However the news was perfectly covered in the next day newspaper. Although in internet updates will be provided every second, these news may or may not be correct. Therefore, there must be some restrictions on such wrong or fake details described. Secondly, concentration and strain to eyes. It is impossible for people of every age to read the articles using any gadgets due to the fact that this can effect one's health. Moreover, a number people will get distracted additionally they either end up reading something else or stops reading the same. For example, whenever a person tries to read an article there can be advertisements which can distract. Consequently, people tend to go and find about it. In addition, some tend to have headache or irritations in eyes when they look over smartphone, tab or laptop. Therefore, it is always better to read hard copies. I recapitulate that although we have numerous websites or all the books are available in internet the comfort of reading from a printed paper is difficult to be achieved using latest technology.
It is irrefutable that modern technology can replace
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newspapers
and magazines in the near future. A number of
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people
has
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started
using E-books or E-news
on the contrary
, for them a satisfactory day is when they receive
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newspaper
in the early morning and
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read
it with a cup of tea or coffee.
However
, I completely disagree with the
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given
statement and reasons
are discussed
below.

One of the major reasons is getting a
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clear
picture about the
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event
or
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news
. Majority believe that the articles printed in a sheet of paper is more relevant and in-depth than what we
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see
in internet.
Moreover
, when the same
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news
is
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read
in a
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newspaper
it seems to have covered everything related to the incident.
For instance
, recently a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plane
crash happened in an airport and each update provided in digital platform was false.
However
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
was
perfectly
covered in the
next
day
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspaper
. Although in internet updates will
be provided
every second, these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
may or may not be correct.
Therefore
, there
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must
be
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some
restrictions on such
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wrong
or fake
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details
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described
.

Secondly
, concentration and strain to eyes. It is impossible for
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people
of every age to
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read
the articles using any gadgets due to the fact that this can effect one's health.
Moreover
, a number
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people
will
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get
distracted
additionally
they either
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end
up reading something else or
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stops
reading the same.
For example
, whenever a person tries to
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read
an article there can be advertisements which can distract.
Consequently
,
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people
tend to go and find about it.
In addition
,
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some
tend to have headache or irritations in eyes when they look over smartphone, tab or laptop.
Therefore
, it is always better to
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read
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
copies.

I recapitulate that although we have numerous websites or all the books are available in internet the comfort of reading from a printed paper is difficult to
be achieved
using latest technology.

IELTS essay Some people say that Ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
319 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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    Present relevant ideas
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