It has been a long time since education had important effect on students’ future. To have a better future in career they should enter college. Before entering college they have to pass curriculum in high school. In my opinion, every nation should suggest all of its students to study same national curriculum before they start to study at college.
Studying the same national curriculum at school provides the same situation for students who want to take part in colleges entrance exams. Actually, students all over the country have the same opportunity and facility to compete with each other. For example, students who live in villages and deprived areas have a good chance to become successful in these exams because all the subjects which they have to study for the exams are the same as what other students in rich cities study. On the other hand, the rule of implementing national curriculum all over the nation helps government to identify talented students and invest in them. For instance, in some regions of countries physical education isn’t highlighted and school heads don’t pay attention to it. If nations need all of schools deans to present the same national curriculum to the students, gifted students will be found in every field of study.
However, there are some economic issues which lead to lack of observation by government. In this case, equality in national curriculum will be lost. There isn’t enough money to support schools in some poor regions so they don’t manage national curriculum the same as the wealthy areas. To overcome these problems, government should regulate some strategies which assign budget to manage institutions in underdeveloped regions.
To conclude, the better education situation e. g. national curriculum students have in their schools, the more successful students will be in passing entrance exams of colleges. Also, it is necessary to develop same national curriculum all over the nation.
It has been a long time since education had
important
effect on
students’
future. To have a better future in career they should enter college.
Before
entering college they
have to
pass
curriculum
in high
school
. In my opinion, every
nation
should suggest all of its
students
to
study
same
national
curriculum
before
they
start
to
study
at college.
Studying the same
national
curriculum
at
school
provides the same situation for
students
who want to
take part
in colleges entrance exams. Actually,
students
all over the country have the same opportunity and facility to compete with each other.
For example
,
students
who
live
in villages and deprived areas have a
good
chance to become successful in these exams
because
all the subjects which they
have to
study
for the exams are the same as what other
students
in rich cities
study
.
On the other hand
, the
rule
of implementing
national
curriculum
all over the
nation
helps
government
to identify talented
students
and invest in them.
For instance
, in
some
regions of countries physical education isn’t highlighted and
school
heads don’t pay attention to it. If
nations
need all of
schools
deans to present the same
national
curriculum
to the
students
, gifted
students
will
be found
in every field of study.
However
, there are
some
economic issues which lead to lack of observation by
government
.
In this case
, equality in
national
curriculum
will
be lost
. There isn’t
enough
money to support
schools
in
some
poor regions
so
they don’t manage
national
curriculum
the same as the wealthy areas. To overcome these problems,
government
should regulate
some
strategies which assign budget to manage institutions in underdeveloped regions.
To conclude
, the better education situation
e. g.
national
curriculum
students
have in their
schools
, the more successful
students
will be in passing entrance exams of colleges.
Also
, it is necessary to develop same
national
curriculum
all over the
nation
.
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42Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes