Many country's main revenue generation is from tourism. Regrettably, problems can arise from mismanaged tourism. Asides the fact that not all tourists are credible, some of them end up staying back and therefore, causing an increase in population. However, tourism enriches the nation by bringing development which attracts foreign investors.
Tourism can have a negative effect on a country, in the sense that some of the visitors might have criminal tendencies. For instance, some convicts may run away from their countries and disguise as tourists in another country. This will result to a high crime rate in the country.
Furthermore, some tourists do not leave at the stipulated time. With this increase in population comes overcrowding and poor standard of living. For instance, a recent survey in India revealed that 50% of the children in public schools belonged to parents who came in as tourists. So the citizens will be at the receiving end.
On the other hand, tourism has been a blessing to many nations. Besides the obvious fact that its a great revenue booster, it also brings about development and popularity of the country. Moreover, developed countries are known to attract investors. For instance, studies has shown that people put their money more in projects that they are certain will earn profit, that is, projects in developed countries. This will in turn enrich the nation greatly.
In conclusion, in as much as tourism may have brought increase in crimes and overcrowding, I believe it has done more good than harm. As it brings about the developed and popularity of a country.
Many
country's
main revenue generation is from
tourism
.
Regrettably
, problems can arise from mismanaged
tourism
. Asides the fact that not all
tourists
are credible,
some
of them
end
up staying back and
therefore
, causing an increase in population.
However
,
tourism
enriches the nation by bringing development which attracts foreign investors.
Tourism can have a
negative
effect on a
country
, in the sense that
some of the
visitors might have criminal tendencies.
For instance
,
some
convicts may run away from their
countries
and disguise as
tourists
in another
country
. This will result to a high crime rate in the country.
Furthermore
,
some
tourists
do not
leave
at the stipulated time. With this increase in population
comes
overcrowding and poor standard of living.
For instance
, a recent survey in India revealed that 50% of the children in public schools belonged to parents who came in as
tourists
.
So
the citizens will be at the receiving
end
.
On the other hand
,
tourism
has been a blessing to
many
nations.
Besides
the obvious fact that
its
a great revenue booster, it
also
brings about development and popularity of the
country
.
Moreover
, developed
countries
are known
to attract investors.
For instance
, studies has shown that
people
put their money more in projects that they are certain will earn profit,
that is
, projects in developed
countries
. This will in turn enrich the nation
greatly
.
In conclusion
, in as much as
tourism
may have brought increase in crimes and overcrowding, I believe it has done more
good
than harm. As it brings about the developed and popularity of a
country
.
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