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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks? v. 4
Nowadays, tourism, as a resource of profit, have become very attractive. However, it is considered that tourism business can also lead different problems. The aim of this essay is to look at negatives and positives of leisure industry. On the one hand, tourism plays a huge role in the development of country. In other words, it is a great industry that boosts the economy, contributes to the development of infrastructure and even though generally contributes to the prosperity of city and country. For example, this industry provides people with jobs, plays a tremendous role in local educational system. Above all it acts as a way of cultural exchange between foreigners and citizens. Consequently, tourism is a developer of country. On the other hand, leisure industry causes irreparable damage to the environment. This means that tourism can cause the risks of erosion, pollution, forest fires, even if most of them behave responsibly. For example, thousands of people travel all over the world and visit the ancient buildings, mausoleums and this in turn increase the traffic, and nature suffers from this. Accordingly, tourism industry has global implications that may not be visible yet. To sum up the industry of tourism has both advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion the benefits of industry exceeds drawbacks as it also can help to regenerate the environment, and can perform as international connection between people all over the world.
Nowadays,
tourism
, as a resource of profit, have become
very
attractive.
However
, it
is considered
that
tourism
business can
also
lead
different
problems. The aim of this essay is to look at negatives and positives of leisure industry.

On the one hand,
tourism
plays a huge role in the development of country.
In other words
, it is a great
industry
that boosts the economy, contributes to the development of infrastructure and
even though
generally
contributes to the prosperity of city and country.
For example
, this
industry
provides
people
with jobs, plays a tremendous role in local educational system.
Above all
it acts as a way of cultural exchange between foreigners and citizens.
Consequently
,
tourism
is a developer of country.

On the other hand
, leisure
industry
causes irreparable damage to the environment. This means that
tourism
can cause the
risks
of erosion, pollution, forest fires, even if most of them behave
responsibly
.
For example
, thousands of
people
travel all over the world and visit the ancient buildings, mausoleums and this in turn increase the traffic, and nature suffers from this.
Accordingly
,
tourism
industry
has global implications that may not be visible
yet
.

To sum up the
industry
of
tourism
has both advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion the benefits of
industry
exceeds drawbacks as it
also
can
help
to regenerate the environment, and can perform as international
connection between
people
all over the world.
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IELTS essay A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

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