Nowadays, there are so many people live and work in other countries, and it became common with us. I’m totally disagree that there will no more international borders in the future and we will able to work and live in as many countries as we want.
On the one hand, open borders may help people have more opportunities to find a good place to live or find a well-paid job to do in some wealthy countries. Secondly, those countries may be overpopulated because of refugees and immigrants, who come to find jobs and a good environment to live in. And the crime rate might rise extremely high.
At the same, we would lose our national identity if we reside in a different country and live with local people for a long time, about 10 or 20 years and we will able to forget our own language. In my opinion, it would cause some problems if we open the international borders like damage the nature, destroy animal’s habitats. The amount of immigrants increase also lead to the requirement of housing, apartments. That is why we have to cut down tree, exploit the forest to build houses and places to people, and the natural materials will be exhausted soon in the future. Vehicles is indispensable factor for people, and the emissions of cars and bikes can make dramatically problem to nature.
In conclusion, open international borders may have some benefits for the world but for me, there are more disadvantages of opening borders than the advantages it will make to our life.
Nowadays, there are
so
many
people
live
and work in other
countries
, and it became common with us. I’m
totally
disagree
that there will no more international
borders
in the
future and
we
will able
to work and
live
in as
many
countries
as we want.
On the one hand, open
borders
may
help
people
have more opportunities to find a
good
place to
live
or find a well-paid job to do in
some
wealthy
countries
.
Secondly
, those
countries
may
be overpopulated
because
of refugees and immigrants, who
come
to find jobs and a
good
environment to
live
in. And the crime rate might rise
extremely
high.
At the same, we would lose our national identity if we reside in a
different
country
and
live
with local
people
for a long time, about 10 or 20
years and
we
will able
to forget our
own
language. In my opinion, it would cause
some
problems if we open the international
borders
like damage the nature,
destroy
animal’s habitats. The amount of immigrants
increase
also
lead to the requirement of housing, apartments.
That is
why we
have to
cut
down tree, exploit the forest to build
houses
and places to
people
, and the natural materials will
be exhausted
soon
in the future. Vehicles
is
indispensable factor for
people
, and the emissions of cars and bikes can
make
dramatically
problem to nature.
In conclusion
, open international
borders
may have
some
benefits for the world
but
for me, there are more disadvantages of opening
borders
than the advantages it will
make
to our life.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes