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A huge number of students choose to study English independently on a self-study basis rather than attend a formal course. However, without the assistance of a teacher, students often find it difficult to manage their studies. v.1

A huge number of students choose to study English independently on a self-study basis rather than attend a formal course. However, without the assistance of a teacher, students often find it difficult to manage their studies. v. 1
At recent years, the vast growth of technology relating to the internet, social media, etc. leads us to learn English easily because the contents are always useful for self-learning at home. However, teacher and class study are found to be beneficial in some ways to maximise the result of learning English. Throughout this essay, an intermediate position can be taken through some considerations given underneath. I believe, self-motivated learning can be more productive by setting goals, the manners in the study process, and the time management. By self-prompting, students or learners can put themselves to the high level of learning by printing modules, looking for needed recordings, collecting movies and watching them, downloading and listening to certain songs, or even doing some chats online with mates living in Western countries. As a result, students can do several things that are urgent to improve several skills which are lack independently and ignore few unnecessary things not to be done. However, as human being commonly, most of the people seem to be inconsistent to deal with individual learning. They need accompanies from teachers and classmates not only to enrich knowledge in class progress but also to gain established goals together. By working for tasks, assignments, and presentations students will not have much free time to conduct wasteful activities motivation to attempt self-study hardly. It is a truth that most people feel convenient to learn in silent, but comfort, in some ways, causes laziness and as a result, people cannot accomplish the English learning. That is why teachers are always needed to be involved. To sum up, I believe that both ways of learning have benefits and drawbacks, therefore, combining them together, without superiority one over another, will be extraordinary relevant to learn English effectively.
At recent years, the vast growth of technology relating to the internet, social media, etc. leads us to learn English
easily
because
the contents are always useful for self-learning at home.
However
, teacher and
class
study
are found
to be beneficial in
some
ways to
maximise
the result of
learning
English. Throughout this essay, an intermediate position can
be taken
through
some
considerations
given
underneath.

I believe, self-motivated
learning
can be more productive by setting goals, the manners in the study process, and the time management. By self-prompting, students or learners can put themselves to the high level of
learning
by printing modules, looking for needed recordings, collecting movies and watching them, downloading and listening to certain songs, or even doing
some
chats online with mates living in Western countries.
As a result
, students can do several things that are urgent to
improve
several
skills
which are lack
independently
and
ignore
few unnecessary things not to
be done
.

However
, as human being
commonly
, most of the
people
seem to be inconsistent to deal with individual
learning
. They need accompanies from teachers and classmates not
only
to enrich knowledge in
class
progress
but
also
to gain established goals together. By working for tasks, assignments, and presentations students will not have much free time to conduct wasteful
activities
motivation to attempt self-study
hardly
.

It is a truth that most
people
feel convenient to learn in silent,
but
comfort, in
some
ways, causes laziness and
as a result
,
people
cannot accomplish the English
learning
.
That is
why teachers are always needed to
be involved
.

To sum up, I believe that both ways of
learning
have
benefits and drawbacks,
therefore
, combining them together, without superiority one over another, will be extraordinary relevant to learn English
effectively
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay A huge number of students choose to study English independently on a self-study basis rather than attend a formal course. However, without the assistance of a teacher, students often find it difficult to manage their studies. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
292 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
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