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Emotional IntelligenceEmotional intelligence consists of self-awareness, self-control, self-motivation, enthusiasm, and social ability. People with emotional intelligence understand their feelings and manage them in ways that are positive and helpful. The v.1

Emotional IntelligenceEmotional intelligence consists of self-awareness, self-control, self-motivation, enthusiasm, and social ability. People with emotional intelligence understand their feelings and manage them in ways that are positive and helpful. The v. 1
Nowadays nigh everybody has a wireless communication device which offers us to work distantly. In this essay I’ll show the major merits and drawbacks of work from home. To start with I wanted to set off the positive sides. One of them is no need to commute. For instance, for such huge cities as Madrid, with its bumper-to-bumper traffic it’s a significant advantage. More specifically, it is a valuable contribution into ecology improving. In addition, individuals themselves can benefit in tons of ways. Namely the flexibility of the time-management. Indeed, if you are an early bird, you can accomplish your tasks at dawn and just chill out the rest of the time. At the same time others prefer dedicate themselves to personal stuff during the daytime and accomplish their job only at night, when it’s less noisy and nothing can distract them. On the other hand there are some alarming outcomes which you should take into account if you are about to work from home. Firstly, you go out less frequently, so you might feel kind of isolation and as a consequence frustration or depression. Indeed, in my case this was the reason why I returned to the office. Sometimes, though, the situation is totally opposite, when the family members disturb you and you can’t accomplish your tasks properly and in time. The last, but not least, you should be aware of possible technical issues. As an illustration, imagine there is an electricity cut or problems with the connection. Certainly, as no technical staff is provided, it’s completely up to you to resolve the issue. That being said, from time to time you really have to wear many hats. To sum up, there are some strong pros and cons. I’ve pointed at by far the most crucial ones, related to health, ecology as well as technical and social factors.
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distantly
. In this essay I’ll
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the major merits and drawbacks of work from home.

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start
with I wanted to set off the
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positive
sides. One of them is no need to commute.
For instance
, for such huge cities as Madrid, with its bumper-to-bumper traffic it’s a significant advantage. More
specifically
, it is a valuable contribution into ecology improving.
In addition
, individuals themselves can benefit in tons of ways.
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the flexibility of the time-management.
Indeed
, if you are an early bird, you can accomplish your tasks at dawn and
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just
chill out the rest of the
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. At the same
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time
others prefer dedicate themselves to personal stuff during the daytime and accomplish their job
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only
at night, when it’s less noisy and nothing can distract them.

On the other hand
there are
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some
alarming outcomes which you should take into account if you are about to work from home.
Firstly
, you go out less
frequently
,
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so
you might feel kind of isolation and as a consequence frustration or depression.
Indeed
, in my case this was the reason why I returned to the office.
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Sometimes
, though, the situation is
totally
opposite, when the family members disturb you and you can’t accomplish your tasks
properly
and in
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time
. The last,
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but
not least, you should be aware of possible technical issues. As an illustration, imagine there is an electricity
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cut
or problems with the connection.
Certainly
, as no technical staff
is provided
, it’s completely up to you to resolve the issue. That
being said
, from
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time
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To sum up, there are
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strong pros and cons. I’ve pointed at by far the most crucial ones, related to health, ecology
as well
as technical and social factors.
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IELTS essay Emotional IntelligenceEmotional intelligence consists of self-awareness, self-control, self-motivation, enthusiasm, and social ability. People with emotional intelligence understand their feelings and manage them in ways that are positive and helpful. The v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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